On Mon, May 23, 2016 at 03:43:09PM +0200, Martin Bjorklund wrote: > [email protected] (Dale R. Worley) wrote: > > > > - Abstract > > > > This Abstract does not list what the document does. E.g., define Yang > > 1.1. Also might help to mention upward-incompatibility. Basically, > > go through section 1 to see what should be in Abstract. Perhaps: > > > > YANG is a data modeling language originally designed to model > > configuration and state data manipulated by the Network > > Configuration Protocol (NETCONF), NETCONF remote procedure calls, > > and NETCONF notifications. This document describes the syntax and > > semantics of version 1.1 of the YANG language. YANG version 1.1 is > > a maintenance release of the YANG language, addressing ambiguities > > and defects in the original specification. There are a small > > number of upward-incompatibilities from Yang 1. This document also > > describes how a data model defined in a YANG module is encoded in > > the Extensible Markup Language (XML), and how NETCONF operations > > are used to manipulate the data. > > Ok, but note that the abstract was changed a bit in -12, so > incorporapting your proposed changes it would be: > > YANG is a data modeling language used to model configuration data, > state data, remote procedure calls, and notifications for network > management protocols. This document describes the syntax and > semantics of version 1.1 of the YANG language. YANG version 1.1 is > a maintenance release of the YANG language, addressing ambiguities > and defects in the original specification. There are a small number > of backward-incompatibilities from YANG version 1. This document also > specifies the YANG mappings to the Network Configuration Protocol > (NETCONF).
Do we have to mention actions in the first sentence as well? /js -- Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <http://www.jacobs-university.de/> _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
