Hi, Andy Bierman <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi, > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-bjorklund-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-00 > > > The introduction in this draft does not really reflect the goals that need > to > be addressed. Perhaps: > > sec 1, para 1: > OLD: > > This document > provides the syntax used in YANG Tree Diagrams. It is expected that > this document will be updated or replaced as changes to the YANG > language, see [RFC7950 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7950>], necessitate. > > > NEW: > > This document provides the syntax used in YANG Tree Diagrams > > for version 1.1 of the YANG data modeling language [RFC7950 > <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7950>]. > > It is expected that this document will be updated or replaced > > for future versions of YANG. It should be possible for > > multiple independent tools to generate the same YANG tree diagrams, > > using this specification.
Ok. > Sec. 2: > > The vertical bar (|) and indentation is not defined. Ok. > The tab alignment is not defined Isn't this covered by indentation above? > The general recursive algorithm is not defined. Yes, on the TODO list. > The mandatory vs. optional parts of the diagram are not defined. Nothing is mandatory; this will be an Informational document. > (e.g., groupings, notifications, rpcs) Yes, on the TODO list. > Examples of all field types should be provided (e.g if-features) Ok. > An ABNF for the grammar should be provided. I don't understand what you refer to? /martin _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
