I have no substantive comments, but have noticed, among other things, a few somewhat inconsequential typos that could nevertheless impact readability, particularly for those for whom English is a second language: • Page 3, penultimate bullet: s/by network operator/by a network operator • Why is figure 1 on page 5 when it is first referenced at the top of page 4? • Section 2.1, second paragraph (2 typos): s/peole or extarnal/people or external • Section 2.1, last paragraph: I don't understand the second sentence that starts: “Although it provides information …” • Section 2.2, second paragraph: i don't understand the first sentence that starts: “Although the [RFC7950], [RFC7950] …” • Section 3.3, second paragraph: s/include ability/include the ability • Section 6: small point but I believe the second acknowledgement should be me(!), “Jonathan Hansford”, not “David”
Jonathan =O) On 1 May 2017, 03:32 +0100, The IESG <[email protected]>, wrote: > > The IESG has received a request from the NETCONF Data Modeling Language > WG (netmod) to consider the following document: > - 'YANG Module Classification' > <draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-06.txt> as Informational > RFC > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits > final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > [email protected] mailing lists by 2017-05-14. Exceptionally, comments may be > sent to [email protected] instead. In either case, please retain the > beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > The YANG data modeling language is currently being considered for a > wide variety of applications throughout the networking industry at > large. Many standards-defining organizations (SDOs), open source > software projects, vendors and users are using YANG to develop and > publish YANG modules for a wide variety of applications. At the same > time, there is currently no well-known terminology to categorize > various types of YANG modules. > > A consistent terminology would help with the categorization of YANG > modules, assist in the analysis of the YANG data modeling efforts in > the IETF and other organizations, and bring clarity to the YANG- > related discussions between the different groups. > > This document describes a set of concepts and associated terms to > support consistent classification of YANG modules. > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification/ballot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
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