> On Sep 25, 2018, at 12:32 PM, Joe Clarke <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Joe Clarke
> Review result: Has Nits
>
> I have been assigned to review this document on behalf of the ops
> directorate.
> This document defines a YANG model for configuring access control lists (ACLs)
> as well as other modules for protocol data types and ether types. Related to
> those, it requests IANA actions to register the modules.
>
> This document is ready, and I only found a few nits in it.
>
> Section 1:
>
> s/criteria allows/criteria allow/ as criteria is plural
>
> s/criteria is/criteria are/
Ok.
>
> ===
>
> Section 3:
>
> s/criteria allows/criteria allows/
You mean
s/criteria allows/criteria allow/
I see one more (in Section 4.2) that I will correct also.
>
> ===
>
> Section 7:
>
> s/together to created a/together to create a/
Ok.
>
> ===
>
> Section A.3:
>
> Why is this module not yang-version 1.1 like the other two?
Ok.
>
>
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