Hi Kent, Authors,

Sorry for the delay in processing this.  WRT your comments, see below:

On 6/27/2019 5:35 PM, Kent Watsen wrote:

This update primarily regards the non-normative script:

    - renamed to "rfcfold"
    - now only uses sed one-liners
    - auto-detects if platforms `[g]sed` and `pcregrep` are present and
       suitable, outputting an error message if not.
    - cleans up the temporary directory if exits for any reason
    - improved error message around the script not implementing the
      force-fold logic.

    Special thanks to Eric Auerswald for supplying the pull requests
    for much of the above!


Outside the updates to the script:

    - renamed 9.3:
          OLD: Example Showing Smart Folding
          NEW: Example Showing "Smart" Folding

    - renamed Appendix A:
          OLD: POSIX Shell Script: rfcfold
          NEW: POSIX Shell Script


My only comments are:

    1) the script itself doesn't name itself "rfcfold" anywhere.
            - albeit, the "name" attribute in the XML is set to "rfcfold".

I think adding a name would be good -- but this is a non-blocking comment.


    2) if the script is expected to be distributed, we may want/need to
        add a copyright statement and/or a pointer to its GitHub repo.


I believe the trust requires a specific license in all code segments in RFCs, see https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/IETF-TLP-5.htm section 4.  I think this needs to be added before the document can be submitted for publication.

Thanks,

Lou

(as Shepherd)


Thanks,
Kent


On Jun 27, 2019, at 5:20 PM, [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> wrote:


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.

       Title           : Handling Long Lines in Inclusions in Internet-Drafts and RFCs
       Authors         : Kent Watsen
                         Adrian Farrel
                         Qin Wu
Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06.txt
Pages           : 26
Date            : 2019-06-27

Abstract:
  This document defines two strategies for handling long lines in
  width-bounded text content.  One strategy is based on the historic
  use of a single backslash ('\') character to indicate where line-
  folding has occurred, with the continuation occurring with the first
  non-space (' ') character on the next line.  The second strategy
  extends the first strategy by adding a second backslash character to
  identify where the continuation begins and thereby able to handle
  cases not supported by the first strategy.  Both strategies use a
  self-describing header enabling automated reconstitution of the
  original content.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

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