Hi, I've reviewed this document, and other than 2 minor nits, I believe that it is ready for publication.
Two minor comments: 1. Section 1.1.1 NMDA. There should be a comma before "and are not redefined here". 2. I wonder whether it would be useful to have a sentence in the "Definitions" section that defines how a structure is encoded. Although I appreciate that this is specified in the YANG module itself. An alternative could be a forward reference from the Definitions section to the YANG module. This could also cover the Xpath behaviour as well. Thanks, Rob From: netmod <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Joel Jaeggli Sent: 27 September 2019 06:32 To: NETMOD Working Group <[email protected]> Subject: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext version 4 All, This starts a two week working group last call for draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext-04 The working group last call ends on Friday October 11th 2019. Please send your comments to the working group mailing list. Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome! This is useful and important, even from authors. https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext-04 The diff from 03, produced prior to IETF 105 is available here: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?difftype=--hwdiff&url2=draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext-04.txt Thanks Joel
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