Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext-04: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-data-ext/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- A fine extension. Just three editorial nits: -- Section 1 — There is no assumption that a YANG data structure can only be used as a top-level abstraction, instead of nested within some other data structure. It’s a little odd to use “instead of” after “there is no assumption”; I can’t explain it fully, but it feels odd to this native English speaker. I suggest this: NEW There is no assumption that a YANG data structure can only be used as a top-level abstraction, and it may also be nested within some other data structure. END similar to the existing YANG "augment" statement. Make it “similarly”. — Section 1.1.1 — The following terms are defined in the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) [RFC8342]. and are not redefined here: The period after the citation should be a comma. _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
