Hi, Joe: Thanks for your valuable comments, see reply inline below. -----邮件原件----- 发件人: Joe Clarke (jclarke) [mailto:jcla...@cisco.com] 发送时间: 2019年10月28日 22:13 收件人: Qin Wu <bill...@huawei.com> 抄送: netmod@ietf.org 主题: Re: [netmod] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-04.txt
> On Oct 27, 2019, at 23:37, Qin Wu <bill...@huawei.com> wrote: > > v-04 is posted > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-04 > additional text to clarify rpc usage. Thanks, Qin. I re-read this latest draft, and albeit there were only a few changes, I have some broader comments. First, I remember we talked about a reboot operation I think at the last IETF(?). It was said that perhaps a reboot would happen as part of this RPC because once the <running> datastore is reset to factory-default, the device would not be reachable. I don’t know where we landed on that. However, I think some attention should be paid to things like zero-touch provisioning. If I reset to factory-default, I would expect the device to undergo any out-of-the-box bootstrapping. Perhaps adding some text that after the RPC is executed, the device SHOULD perform any initial bootstrapping processes? [Qin]:Yes, initial bootstrapping processes should be covered, I will propose text in the separate email for this. === In Section 2, perhaps for clarity say that, “Factory-default content SHALL be specified by one of the following means in descending order of precedence”? I’m nit-picking on this one, though. [Qin]: okay, fixed. === In Section 2, you mention Instance Data is second in the list. What is really meant by this? Does that mean the factory-default config is defined by an instance data file specified by the vendor in some offline location? If so, perhaps it’s worth clarifying that. [Qin]: How about the following proposed changes: OLD TEXT " YANG Instance Data [I-D.ietf-netmod-yang-instance-file-format] " NEW TEXT: " by vendors using YANG Instance Data [I-D.ietf-netmod-yang-instance-file-format] file format in vendor's website or other places where off-line document is kept; " === In Section 2 and in the YANG module description for the RPC your tenses don’t match. You should say: Upon receiving the RPC the server resets the contents of all read-write configuration datastore (e.g., <running> and <startup>) to their factory-default contents. [Qin]:Good catch, fixed. === In Section 2, you say, “some of the SW processes”. I think you mean software. You should expand SW. [Qin]:Fixed. Joe > > -Qin > -----邮件原件----- > 发件人: internet-dra...@ietf.org [mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org] > 发送时间: 2019年10月28日 11:36 > 收件人: Niuye <ni...@huawei.com>; Qin Wu <bill...@huawei.com>; Qin Wu > <bill...@huawei.com>; Balazs Lengyel <balazs.leng...@ericsson.com> > 主题: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-04.txt > > > A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-04.txt > has been successfully submitted by Qin Wu and posted to the IETF repository. > > Name: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default > Revision: 04 > Title: Factory Default Setting > Document date: 2019-10-26 > Group: netmod > Pages: 11 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-04.txt > Status: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default/ > Htmlized: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-04 > Htmlized: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default > Diff: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-04 > > Abstract: > This document defines a method to reset a server to its factory- > default content. The reset operation may be used e.g. during initial > zero-touch configuration or when the existing configuration has major > errors, so re-starting the configuration process from scratch is the > best option. > > A new factory-reset RPC is defined. Several methods of documenting > the factory-default content are specified. > > Optionally a new "factory-default" read-only datastore is defined, > that contains the data that will be copied over to the running > datastore at reset. > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > The IETF Secretariat > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
