Joe again:
发件人: Joe Clarke (jclarke) [mailto:[email protected]]
发送时间: 2019年11月1日 23:31
收件人: Kent Watsen <[email protected]>
抄送: [email protected]; [email protected]
主题: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05.txt




On Nov 1, 2019, at 11:21, Kent Watsen 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:



This begins a two-week Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on 
draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05.  The WGLC ends on Nov 15 (two days before 
the NETMOD 106 session).  Please send your comments to the working group 
mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready 
for publication", are welcome!  This is useful and important, even from 
authors.  Objections, concerns, and suggestions are also welcomed at this time.

In general, I think it’s ready to go.  Two nits:

* My name is misspelled in the acknowledgements
[Qin]:Apologize, fixed.


* In Section 2:

OLD:

2. by vendors using YANG Instance Data […] file format in vendor’s website or 
other places where off-line document is kept;

NEW:

2. by vendors using a file in YANG Instance Data […] format on the vendor’s 
website or in other places where similar off-line documents are kept;

[Qin]:Fixed, thanks.

Joe

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