Hi Rich, Thank you for the comment.
I think that you got the intent of that wording: leave room for judgement of what merits to be called out there. I have personally a preference to maintain the current wording, but I'm open to hear more opinions. Cheers, Med De : Salz, Rich <[email protected]> Envoyé : vendredi 24 novembre 2023 18:21 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[email protected]>; [email protected] Cc : Qin Wu ([email protected]) <[email protected]> Objet : Re: [saag] draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis: YANG Security Template The Security template used in documents that specify YANG modules is stable since years now. FYI, we are in the process of preparing RFC8407bis, so we would welcome comments on that part: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-04#name-security-considerations-sec<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-04*name-security-considerations-sec__;Iw!!GjvTz_vk!Wi0wD9nwg7iZZAjTfkB7QqNL-LvuU6QVvwBGKkZahy-K6G4plm7jZnshBtJGUw7NF-qSUgKU5tVkz7JRZzGbTcQb$> You should remove the word "especially" in the two places it's used and "significant" from the privacy concerns item. They do not make the intent more clear, and when you remove those words it still leaves the authors to have room for judgement. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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