The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8407, "Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of Documents Containing YANG Data Models".
-------------------------------------- You may review the report below and at: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7791 -------------------------------------- Type: Editorial Reported by: Dale R. Worley <[email protected]> Section: GLOBAL Original Text ------------- There are two related items. 1) Section 3.7.1 "Security Considerations Section Template" begins X. Security Considerations The YANG module specified in this document defines a schema for data that is designed to be accessed via network management protocols such as NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040]. The lowest NETCONF layer is the secure transport layer, and the mandatory-to-implement secure transport is Secure Shell (SSH) [RFC6242]. The lowest RESTCONF layer is HTTPS, and the mandatory-to-implement secure transport is TLS [RFC8446]. 2) RFC 8470 says "the latest approved template (available at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines>)". But the template at that URL says "the latest approved template (available at http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/ops/trac/wiki/yang-security-guidelines)." Corrected Text -------------- 1) It would be helpful if the beginning of the template contained a reference to RFC 8407 to provide a pointer back to where the templated section of Yang module definitions was instantiated from. Perhaps starting the template with "[Instantiated from the template of [RFC8407] section 3.7.1.]" 2) While the URL given in RFC 8407 works, the URL given in the online template only goes to a generic page, "Welcome to the IETF Community Wiki". Presumably the URL in the online template should be the URL of that page itself. Notes ----- Item (2) is a straightforward correction. Item (1) is in service to having better pointers/references in our documents. Instructions: ------------- This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". (If it is spam, it will be removed shortly by the RFC Production Center.) Please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party will log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -------------------------------------- RFC8407 (draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-20) -------------------------------------- Title : Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of Documents Containing YANG Data Models Publication Date : October 2018 Author(s) : A. Bierman Category : BEST CURRENT PRACTICE Source : Network Modeling Area : Operations and Management Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
