Hi Qiufang, all,
I confirm. I don’t think any change is needed to the text.
FWIW, here is the full details:
(1)
Idnits complains about:
== There are 6 instances of lines with non-ascii characters in the document.
But, we can’t change the names of Matin, Benoît, Jürgen, Petr, etc. :-)
(2) it also displays
-- The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but may
have content which was first submitted before 10 November 2008. If you
have contacted all the original authors and they are all willing to grant
the BCP78 rights to the IETF Trust, then this is fine, and you can ignore
this comment. If not, you may need to add the pre-RFC5378 disclaimer.
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but this does not apply as Andy is co-author.
(3)
== Unused Reference: 'IANA-YANG-PARAMETERS' is defined on line 3689, but no
explicit reference was found in the text
This is not correct as this is used:
3327 This document defines the initial version of the IANA-maintained
3328 "iana-foo" YANG module. The most recent version of the YANG module
3329 is available from the "YANG Parameters" registry
3330 [IANA-YANG-PARAMETERS].
-- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'ID-Guidelines'
This is a non-RFC. Also, this was borrowed from rfc8407.
** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 8792
8792 is already listed in the downref registry
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 7223
(Obsoleted by RFC 8343)
This one is intentional.
Idem for pyang, the warnings are because the templates use, e.g., “<insert
year>” while pyang expects 2025, etc.
Cheers,
Med
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Objet : RE: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22.txt
Hi, Kent,
I raised the similar comment in the shepherd review, Med enlightened me that it
is not an error to have a normative reference to RFC 8792, as it is listed in
the Downref registry (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref). Perhaps I
should update the write-up to reflect this explicitly (I will do that). Other
warnings/comments are either innocuous or intentional, But I will let Med to
reconfirm this as well.
Best Regards,
Qiufang
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Sent: Tuesday, January 21, 2025 7:00 AM
To: Med Boucadair
<mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>>; maqiufang
(A) <maqiufa...@huawei.com<mailto:maqiufa...@huawei.com>>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22.txt
Hi Med,
ID-NITs reports:
Summary: 1 error (**), 0 flaws (~~), 2 warnings (==), 5 comments (—).
The error must be fixed. Please looks at the rest as well.
Hi Qiufang (as Shepherd)
Can you update the write-up question #14 to reflect the fix when it comes out?
Kent and Lou
On Jan 14, 2025, at 11:53 AM,
mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> wrote:
Hi all,
Given a comment raised by Kent, updated the commentary text in the sec template
to avoid citing a specific regional law + split a long sentence. This revision
also update the RPC part to also cite action per a comment received from Rob.
Hope this version is ready to be handed to the IESG.
Cheers,
Med
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Qin Wu
Name: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22.txt
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