Document: draft-ietf-netmod-intf-ext-yang Title: Common Interface Extension YANG Data Models Reviewer: Reese Enghardt Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-intf-ext-yang-17 Reviewer: Reese Enghardt Review Date: 2025-10-10 IETF LC End Date: 2025-10-14 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The draft is clear and concise, and is ready for publication as Proposed Standard. Major issues: None. Minor issues: Section 9 (Security Considerations) has RFC AAAA, but I don't see where that reference is defined. Please double-check that this reference is clear. Nits/editorial comments: Are Sections 2 and 3 the high level descriptions and Sections 4 and 5 the formal specifications? The headings are not clear about this, as the difference between them is "Module" VS "YANG module". Please consider changing the headings to make the structure of the document clearer. In Section 9, if there are no particularly sensitive nodes, does this text need to be included at all? _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
