Team,

       I would like to highlight the correction needed on the following link

http://fosscomm.in/FOSSManifesto#preview

in particular , the line "Encouragement of skills development and
upgradation"
Upgradation is used informally, which will not be right in our manifesto.

It can be rewritten as:

Encouraging development of skills and upgrading them.

Also: Technology upgradation of India's Small and Medium Enterprises

can be rewritten as: Technological upgrades applied to Small and Medium
Enterprises.

Please let me know about your thought.


-- 
Cheers,
Jagjit

Our actions are our master;
actions are master of the world.
Pleasure and pain are given by our actions
-- who else is lord of the world?
_______________________________________________
network mailing list
[email protected]
http://lists.fosscom.in/listinfo.cgi/network-fosscom.in

Reply via email to