Renee> The NWAM team is approaching dev complete on NWAM phase 1.  We've had
Renee> input from many of you along the way on our design, which has evolved
Renee> over the past year as we've worked on the implementation.

I made it thru the rest of the sections this morning.

* Section 5: out of curiosity, why does the Revision History at the end only
  cover 2.* when most of the other sections are all 0.<whatever>?

* §6.1

  * The write-up of sub-commands for nwamcfg and nwamadm is good, but I don't
    see anything about the base syntax for either command, like one might see
    in the Synopsis section of a man page.
  * Has thought been given about how to extend these commands in later phases
    when more than one NCP will be supported?
  * Same question about Revision History as above (again, just curious :-).

* §6.2: I only skimmed this, and my only comment is to suggest that the
  various red text items be addressed/answered before the design is considered
  fully complete.

* Sections 7 and 8: particularly well written; kudos.

* §9.2 mentions CR 6219893 in the future tense; however, this CR was closed
  as a duplicate of 6695904 which was fixed in build 98.

-- John

http://blogs.sun.com/jbeck
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