All,

Hopefully this is the final code review for this CR.  I think this addresses
all the comments from Nico, Tom and Mark.  The complete webreview is available
at:

    http://cr.opensolaris.org/~johnfisc/nodename-6974969/

A diff-ed webreview from the last email is available at:

    http://cr.opensolaris.org/~johnfisc/nodename-6974969-diffs/

A diff-ed webreview from the original webreview is available at:

    http://cr.opensolaris.org/~johnfisc/nodename-6974969-diffs-orig/

Thanks,

John


----- Original Message -----
From: tom.whit...@oracle.com
To: john.fisc...@oracle.com
Cc: networking-discuss@opensolaris.org, smf-disc...@opensolaris.org
Sent: Monday, August 9, 2010 10:11:30 AM GMT -08:00 US/Canada Pacific
Subject: Re: [networking-discuss] [smf-discuss] Code review request for CR 
6974969 [PSARC/2010/223]

On Mon, Aug 09, 2010 at 08:56:54AM -0700, John Fischer wrote:
> Tom and Nico (et. al.),
> 
> I have updated the webrev based upon feedback provided.
> The new webrev is located at:
> 
>     http://cr.opensolaris.org/~johnfisc/nodename-6974969
> 
> I have also posted a diffs webrev at:
> 
>     http://cr.opensolaris.org/~johnfisc/nodename-6974969.diffs
> 
> If I can get this review completed early this week I think
> that I can get this back into ON before Monday.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> John

John,

I'm sorry that I didn't have a chance to respond to your query before you
sent out the webrev.  In usr/src/cmd/svc/milestone/identity.xml, the extra
decoration should go in the <templates> section.  You probably want to do
something like this:

        <template>
                ...
                </documentation>
                <pg_pattern name="config" type="application>
                        <description>
                                <loctext xml:lang='C'>
Properties that control the configuration of the node
                                </loctext>
                        </description>
                        <prop_pattern name="nodename" type="astring">
                                <description>
                                        <loctext xml:lang='C'>
Network name of the computer
                                        </loctext>
                                </description>
                        </prop_pattern>
                </pg_pattern>

        </template>

Feel free to change the actual text of the messages.

The rest of the changes look good to me, but I'm by no means a ksh expert.

tom
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