Hi,
On Tue, Aug 29, 2023 at 09:21:54PM +0300, Maxim Dounin wrote:
> On Tue, Aug 29, 2023 at 08:54:46PM +0300, Sergey A. Osokin wrote:
[...]
> > <para>
> > Enables the specified protocols.
> > +
> > +<para>
>
> $ make
> ...
> xmllint --noout --valid xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.xml
> xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.xml:626: element para:
> validity error : Element para is not declared in para list of
> possible children
> </para>
> ^
> gmake[1]: *** [GNUmakefile:164:
> libxslt/en/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.html] Error 4
>
>
> In this particular case, appropriate solution would be to close
> the paragraph, and put notes into their own paragraph.
Fixed.
> > +If the directive is specified on the <link id="server"/> level,
> > +the value from the default will be used.
>
> s/the default/the default server/
Fixed.
> Also, reading it again I tend to think that "will be used" might
> be misleading. It might be good to adjust this somehow to make it
> clear that ssl_protocols works if used in the default server, but
> will use the configuration from the default server if used in a
> name-based virtual server. Not sure how though.
>
> Alternatively, just using "can be used" as in other directives
> might be good enough.
I'd prefer to keep "will be used", so I slightly change the
target, please take a look.
> > +Defails are provided in the
>
> s/Defails/Details/
Fixed.
> > +виртуального сервера</link>”.
> > +</para>
> > +
> > <note>
>
> Same here.
Fixed, here's another revision.
# HG changeset patch
# User Sergey A. Osokin <o...@freebsd.org.ru>
# Date 1693338612 -10800
# Tue Aug 29 22:50:12 2023 +0300
# Node ID e61a21da119d7284b3b93f9a3ab530e1556fae09
# Parent 4e25281328fa2152cadedc52e05f8a1b1bf531cd
Updated ngx_http_ssl_module module documentation.
Provided details about ssl_protocol directive usage by
adding link to the "Server names" document.
diff -r 4e25281328fa -r e61a21da119d xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.xml
--- a/xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.xml Tue Aug 29 09:11:57 2023 +0100
+++ b/xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.xml Tue Aug 29 22:50:12 2023 +0300
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<module name="Module ngx_http_ssl_module"
link="/en/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.html"
lang="en"
- rev="61">
+ rev="62">
<section id="summary">
@@ -602,6 +602,18 @@
<para>
Enables the specified protocols.
+</para>
+
+<para>
+If the directive is specified on the <link id="server"/> level of a
+name-based virtual server, the value from the default server will
+be used.
+Details are provided in the
+“<link doc="server_names.xml" id="virtual_server_selection">Virtual
+server selection</link>” section.
+</para>
+
+<para>
<note>
The <literal>TLSv1.1</literal> and <literal>TLSv1.2</literal> parameters
(1.1.13, 1.0.12) work only when OpenSSL 1.0.1 or higher is used.
diff -r 4e25281328fa -r e61a21da119d xml/ru/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.xml
--- a/xml/ru/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.xml Tue Aug 29 09:11:57 2023 +0100
+++ b/xml/ru/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.xml Tue Aug 29 22:50:12 2023 +0300
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<module name="Модуль ngx_http_ssl_module"
link="/ru/docs/http/ngx_http_ssl_module.html"
lang="ru"
- rev="61">
+ rev="62">
<section id="summary">
@@ -607,6 +607,18 @@
<para>
Разрешает указанные протоколы.
+</para>
+
+<para>
+Если директива указана на уровне основанного на имени виртуального
+<link id="server"/>, то будет использоваться значение из сервера
+по умолчанию.
+Подробнее см. в разделе
+“<link doc="server_names.xml" id="virtual_server_selection">Выбор
+виртуального сервера</link>”.
+</para>
+
+<para>
<note>
Параметры <literal>TLSv1.1</literal> и <literal>TLSv1.2</literal>
(1.1.13, 1.0.12) работают только при использовании OpenSSL 1.0.1 и выше.
--
Sergey A. Osokin
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