avinal commented on a change in pull request #6389:
URL: https://github.com/apache/apisix/pull/6389#discussion_r811582905



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File path: docs/en/latest/how-to-build.md
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@@ -65,38 +67,40 @@ sudo yum clean all && yum makecache
 sudo yum install -y --downloadonly --downloaddir=./apisix apisix
 ```
 
-Copy `./apisix` folder to the target host, run the following command to 
install Apache APISIX.
+Then copy `./apisix` folder to the target host and run the following command 
to install.
 
 ```shell
 sudo yum install ./apisix/*.rpm
 ```
 
 ### Installation via Docker
 
-Please refer to: [Installing Apache APISIX with 
Docker](https://hub.docker.com/r/apache/apisix).
+Please refer to [Installing Apache APISIX with 
Docker](https://hub.docker.com/r/apache/apisix).
 
 ### Installation via Helm Chart
 
-Please refer to: [Installing Apache APISIX with Helm 
Chart](https://github.com/apache/apisix-helm-chart).
+Please refer to [Installing Apache APISIX with Helm 
Chart](https://github.com/apache/apisix-helm-chart).
 
 ### Installation via Source Release Package
 
+Follow the steps below to install Apache APISIX via the source release package.
+
 1. Create a directory named `apisix-2.12.0`.
 
   ```shell
   APISIX_VERSION='2.12.0'
   mkdir apisix-${APISIX_VERSION}
   ```
 
-2. Download Apache APISIX Release source package.
+2. Download the [Apache APISIX source release 
package](https://downloads.apache.org/apisix/APISIX_VERSION/apache-apisix-APISIX_VERSION-src.tgz).
 
   ```shell
   wget 
https://downloads.apache.org/apisix/${APISIX_VERSION}/apache-apisix-${APISIX_VERSION}-src.tgz
   ```
 
-  You can also download the Apache APISIX Release source package from the 
Apache APISIX website. The [Apache APISIX Official Website - Download 
Page](https://apisix.apache.org/downloads/) also provides source packages for 
Apache APISIX, APISIX Dashboard and APISIX Ingress Controller.
+  You can also download the Apache APISIX source release package from the 
[Apache APISIX website](https://apisix.apache.org/downloads/). The website also 
provides source packages for Apache APISIX, APISIX Dashboard and APISIX Ingress 
Controller.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
     You can also download the Apache APISIX source release package from the 
[Apache APISIX website](https://apisix.apache.org/downloads/). The website also 
provides source packages for Apache APISIX, APISIX Dashboard, and APISIX 
Ingress Controller.
   ```




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