SylviaBABY commented on code in PR #1169:
URL: https://github.com/apache/apisix-website/pull/1169#discussion_r909271624


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website/blog/2021/06/28/why-we-need-Apache-APISIX.md:
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@@ -155,24 +156,24 @@ The diagram on the right shows the internal architecture 
of APISIX Mesh.
 
 After talking so much about the present of APISIX, let's also talk about the 
future of APISIX.
 
-Because APISIX is currently an Apache Foundation project, it is no longer the 
property of individuals or companies, but of all humanity. This gives every one 
of you in the community the right to decide which direction it will go.
+Because APISIX is an Apache Foundation project, it is no longer the property 
of individuals or companies but all humanity. This gives everyone in the 
community the right to decide which direction it will go.
 
-The default configuration center for the open source version of APISIX is 
etcd, and while it is still the best choice, we still often hear about support 
for other configuration centers when we talk to users, more often than not 
because etcd is so new that it is not on the list of supported products in the 
company's existing operations and maintenance products. So we plan to make 
APISIX work with other configuration centers.
+The default configuration center for the open-source version of APISIX is 
etcd. While it is still the best choice, we often hear about support for other 
configuration centers when talking to users because etcd is so new that it is 
not on the list of supported products in the company's existing operations and 
maintenance products. So we plan to make APISIX work with other configuration 
centers.
 
 ![APISIX data 
plane](https://static.apiseven.com/202108/1646311124305-eebfd917-43b7-459a-99f8-150f33336d91.jpg)
 
-APISIX is already on the road to full traffic data plane, and I believe we all 
ask questions such as: Why do we need to unify traffic forwarding? Does 
unification bring value to the enterprise? What are the benefits to the 
technical staff? With these questions in mind, let's look at the following 
diagram.
+APISIX is already on the road to the full traffic data plane, and I believe we 
all ask questions such as: Why do we need to unify traffic forwarding? Does 
unification bring value to the enterprise? What are the benefits to the 
technical staff? With these questions in mind, let's look at the following 
diagram.
 
 ![APISIX 
goal](https://static.apiseven.com/202108/1646311097068-1c54852d-1272-434e-86c6-ed946e875792.jpg)
 
-Unification itself is not the goal, but the benefits after unification is the 
logic behind our pursuit, and several different perspectives are given below to 
elaborate separately.
+Unification itself is not the goal, but the benefits after unification are the 
logic behind our pursuit, and several different perspectives are given below to 
elaborate separately.
 
 - Operation and maintenance role: use the same operation and maintenance tools 
to collect logs, metrics, etc., and reuse existing accumulations.
 
-- Development role: based on standardized APISIX plug-in development, the 
capabilities can be easily reused, and the accumulated experience can be 
applied to different product lines such as LB, API Gateway, K8s Ingress, etc.
+- Development role: based on standardized APISIX plugin development, the 
capabilities can be easily reused, and the accumulated experience can be 
applied to different product lines such as LB, API Gateway, K8s Ingress, etc.
 
 - Company value: Unify technology stack, reduce company operation cost, reduce 
the difficulty of transitioning to microservices and cloud-native, and 
accelerate enterprise digital transformation.
 
-Last but not least is the APISIX [Slack 
channel](https://apisix.apache.org/docs/general/join#join-the-slack-channel), 
any questions can be left here or on [Github 
issue](https://github.com/apache/apisix/issues), there will be someone to 
respond quickly, thanks again.
+Last but not least is the APISIX [Slack 
channel](https://apisix.apache.org/docs/general/join#join-the-slack-channel), 
any questions can be left here, or on [Github 
issue](https://github.com/apache/apisix/issues), there will be someone to 
respond quickly, thanks again.
 
-Click to watch the 
[video](https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1w54y1V73Z?p=1&share_medium=android&share_plat=android&share_source=COPY&share_tag=s_i&timestamp=1621812452&unique_k=PEusrt)
+Click [here](https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1w54y1V73Z) to watch the 
[recordig video](https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1w54y1V73Z).

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   Click [here](https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1w54y1V73Z) to watch the 
recording video.
   ```



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