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Change subject: [NO ISSUE] Document window functions.
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Patch Set 1:

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https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/0_toc.md
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PS1, Line 38: * [Window Clause (OVER Clause)](#WindowClause)
> OVER clause is strictly speaking not a window clause.
Changed to "OVER clause (Window Definition)"


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/14_window.md
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https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/14_window.md@260
PS1, Line 260:       tied objects in the window frame, the function returns the 
lowest value
> "lowest"? what if ORDER BY had DESC modifier?
Changed to "first". Added a note that the order of tuples depends on the window 
order clause.


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/14_window.md@491
PS1, Line 491:       tied objects in the window frame, the function returns the 
highest
> "highest"? What if ORDER BY had DESC modifier?
Changed to "last". Added a note that the order of tuples depends on the window 
order clause.


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/14_window.md@691
PS1, Line 691:     * [Nth Val From](#nthval-from): (Optional) Determines where 
the function
> trailing whitespace
Done


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/14_window.md@743
PS1, Line 743:     * If the window frame is defined by `RANGE` or `GROUPS`, and 
there are
> lowest/highest will also depend on the ORDER BY modifier (DESC/ASC)
Changed to "first" and "last". Added a note that the order of tuples depends on 
the window order clause.


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md
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PS1, Line 20: ## <a id="WindowClause">Window Clause (OVER Clause)</a> ##
> May be instead of "window clause" we should call it "window function call e
I've called it "OVER Clause (Window Function Calls)".


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@23
PS1, Line 23: the order of objects within the window, and the size of the 
window frame.
> May be say "the order of tuples within those partitions". Also, I'd may be
Done


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@24
PS1, Line 24: The `OVER` keyword introduces the window clause.
> " ... introduces the window function call" ?
Removed this, as I think it's not necessary if referring to the "OVER clause".


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@94
PS1, Line 94: The AS keyword enables you to specify an alias for the window 
clause.
> ".. an alias for the window frame contents". It introduces a variable which
Done


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@97
PS1, Line 97: window clause using this alias, for example:
> may be "refers to this alias"? The alias is just a variable that's introduc
Done


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@99
PS1, Line 99:     FROM source
> I'd give an alias for "source" too: "FROM source AS src", then change "FROM
Done


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@125
PS1, Line 125: ### <a id="window-clause">Window Clause</a> ###
> Again, we probably should not call it "Window Clause" to avoid confusion wi
I've gone for "Window Definition", following PostgreSQL


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@137
PS1, Line 137: The **window partition clause** groups the query results into 
partitions using
> "groups the query results" might be confusing. Unlike GROUP BY window funct
Done


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@150
PS1, Line 150: The **window order clause** determines how objects are ordered 
within each
> I think we call them "tuples" in this documentation, not "objects".
Done throughout


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@238
PS1, Line 238: The ordering term expression must evaluate to a number.
> In AsterixDB it can also evaluate to date/time/datetime. See https://ci.apa
Done


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/15_over.md@252
PS1, Line 252: In JSON, dates and times are represented as a string in ISO-8601 
standard.
> AsterixDB also has temporal data types (date, datetime, duration, etc). RAN
Left this section alone for now.


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/3448/1/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/builtins/9_aggregate_sql.md
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PS1, Line 35: Aggregate functions may also be used as window functions when 
they are used with a window clause,
> I'd say "OVER clause" instead of "window clause". We need to keep in mind t
Done



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