Till Westmann has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: NCService documentation improvements
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Patch Set 4:

(9 comments)

https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/1490/4/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/site/markdown/ncservice.md
File asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/site/markdown/ncservice.md:

PS4, Line 34: user@localhost:~/
            :     ➤ cd asterix-server/
            :     user@localhost:~/asterix-server
            :     ➤ cd opt/local/bin
In other part of the documentation we just use

    $ some_cmd

to document shell command. I think that's simpler and it would also be more 
consistent to do the same here.


PS4, Line 41: simply
One "simply" too many.


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PS4, Line 101: ncservice.png
I've got an SVG for this. Could we use that instead?


PS4, Line 199: '
wrong quote


PS4, Line 208: ics.uci.edu
Do we want to keep those hostnames in here?


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