Till Westmann has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: Add documentation for query parameters.
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Patch Set 2:

(19 comments)

https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/1586/2/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/sqlpp/0_toc.md
File asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/sqlpp/0_toc.md:

PS2, Line 76: Tuning
I think that these parameters are not part of the language, but rather a part 
of the system implementing the language. So I think that we  should put this 
section to the end - probably as an appendix. 

We can decide, if we want to put the SET statement into the language or into 
the same section as the parameters themselves, but I would propose to keep the 
statement and the parameters together for now.


https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/1586/2/asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/sqlpp/4_parameter.md
File asterixdb/asterix-doc/src/main/markdown/sqlpp/4_parameter.md:

PS2, Line 4: configuration file
I think that the SQL++ documentation does contain system specific information 
like e.g. the configuration file. I think that we should keep this more 
generic. e.g.:

    The SET statement can be used to override some cluster-wide configuration 
parameters for a specific request:


PS2, Line 8: Since each parameter described as follows
           : is a fully qualified name, we have to use a backtick (\`\`) to 
make it a delimited identifier.
As parameter identifier are qualified names (containing a '.') they have to be 
escaped using backticks (\`\`).


PS2, Line 10: According to the syntax, the value part of each parameter has to 
always be a string.
I think that we don't need this sentence, as we already say that it's a 
STRING_LITERAL further up.


PS2, Line 15: multiple
s/multiple/multiple cores on multiple/


PS2, Line 15: Since the
s/Since the/The/


PS2, Line 15: individual query
s/individual query/request/


PS2, Line 16: , a
s/, a/. A/


PS2, Line 16: query
request


PS2, Line 16: ,
            : based on on her/his own need,
s/, based on on her/his own need,//


PS2, Line 33: memory footprint
s/memory footprint/fixed memory/


PS2, Line 33: even
s/even//


PS2, Line 34: much 
s/much//


PS2, Line 34: given
s/given//


PS2, Line 35: Using the `SET` statement, a
s/Using the `SET` statement, a/A/


PS2, Line 36:  listed as follows
a/ listed as follows//


PS2, Line 52:   
Just one space?


PS2, Line 60:   
Just one space?


PS2, Line 68:   
Just one space?


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