> > "saved in queue" -> "save in a queue"
> This one is actually just right out of our manual so I think the same fix 
> needs to go there.

Yes, thanks for the pointer.
 
> > "A simple cache listener is used to print output to terminal create events 
> > are received" -> "output to the terminal as create events are received"
> 
> Do you think it isn't worth mentioning that a cache listener is used to print 
> to terminal? I suppose they can see that in the code, but technically cache 
> listeners are a different topic and I didn't want users to be lost if they 
> didn't know about cache listeners.

Not my intention - unclear comment on my part. I'm suggesting the following:
- Leave the 'cache listener' part in place
- Replace  "output to terminal create events are received" with "output to 
*the* terminal *as* create events are received"





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