karensmolermiller commented on a change in pull request #6134:
URL: https://github.com/apache/geode/pull/6134#discussion_r595413270



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+<% set_title("Upgrading", product_name_long) %>
+
+
+<!--
+Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
+contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
+this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
+The ASF licenses this file to You under the Apache License, Version 2.0
+(the "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance with
+the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+limitations under the License.
+-->
+
+To upgrade an existing installation to a new version of 
<%=vars.product_name_long%>,
+follow these general steps:
+
+1. Back up your current system.
+1. Install the new version of the software.
+1. Stop your distributed system using the current software.
+1. Restart the system using the new software.
+
+In many cases, components running under the current version can be stopped 
selectively, then restarted under the new version
+so that the distributed system as a whole remains functional during the 
upgrade process; this is known as a "rolling upgrade."

Review comment:
       Maybe change _distributed system_ to _cluster_?

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+<% set_title("Upgrading", product_name_long) %>
+
+
+<!--
+Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
+contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
+this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
+The ASF licenses this file to You under the Apache License, Version 2.0
+(the "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance with
+the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+limitations under the License.
+-->
+
+To upgrade an existing installation to a new version of 
<%=vars.product_name_long%>,
+follow these general steps:
+
+1. Back up your current system.
+1. Install the new version of the software.
+1. Stop your distributed system using the current software.
+1. Restart the system using the new software.
+
+In many cases, components running under the current version can be stopped 
selectively, then restarted under the new version
+so that the distributed system as a whole remains functional during the 
upgrade process; this is known as a "rolling upgrade."
+
+In other cases, the entire system must be stopped in order to accomplish the 
upgrade,
+which will require some downtime for your system.
+
+See [Planning an Upgrade](upgrade_planning.html) to choose the upgrade 
scenario that best suits your implementation and to understand the resources
+you will need to accomplish the upgrade. Then select the appropriate upgrade 
procedure for more detailed instructions that fit your specific needs.
+
+## <a id="upgrade_details" class="no-quick-link"></a>Upgrade Details
+
+-   **[Planning an Upgrade](upgrade_planning.html)**
+
+    This section discusses the upgrade paths for various 
<%=vars.product_name_long%>
+    versions, and it lists information you need to know before you begin
+    the upgrade process.
+
+-   **[Rolling Upgrade](upgrade_rolling.html)**
+
+    A rolling upgrade allows you to keep your existing distributed system 
running while you upgrade your members gradually.

Review comment:
       Maybe change _distributed system_ to _cluster_?

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+<% set_title("Upgrading", product_name_long) %>
+
+
+<!--
+Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
+contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
+this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
+The ASF licenses this file to You under the Apache License, Version 2.0
+(the "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance with
+the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+limitations under the License.
+-->
+
+To upgrade an existing installation to a new version of 
<%=vars.product_name_long%>,
+follow these general steps:
+
+1. Back up your current system.
+1. Install the new version of the software.
+1. Stop your distributed system using the current software.

Review comment:
       Maybe change _distributed system_ to  _cluster_?

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+---
+title:  Rolling Upgrade
+---
+
+<!--
+Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
+contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
+this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
+The ASF licenses this file to You under the Apache License, Version 2.0
+(the "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance with
+the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+limitations under the License.
+-->
+
+A rolling upgrade eliminates system downtime by keeping your existing 
distributed system running while you upgrade one member at a time.
+Each upgraded member can communicate with other members that are still running 
the earlier version of <%=vars.product_name%>, so servers can respond to
+client requests even as the upgrade is underway. Interdependent data members 
can be stopped and started without mutually blocking, a problem
+that can occur when multiple data members are stopped at the same time.
+
+## <a id="rolling-upgrade-limitations-requirements" 
class="no-quick-link"></a>Rolling Upgrade Limitations and Requirements
+
+**Versions**
+
+Rolling upgrade requires that the older and newer versions of 
<%=vars.product_name%> are mutually compatible, which usually means that they
+share the same major version number.
+
+See [Version Compatibilities](upgrade_planning.html#version_compatibilities)
+for more details on how different versions of <%=vars.product_name%> can 
interoperate.
+
+**Components**
+
+Rolling upgrades apply to the peer members or cache servers within a 
distributed system.

Review comment:
       If changing other things, can you add locators to this list? They are 
peer members, but I don't know that readers would know.

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                             </li>
                         </ul>
                     </li>
+                    <li class="has_submenu">
+                       <a 
href="/docs/guide/<%=vars.product_version_nodot%>/getting_started/upgrade/upgrade_overview.html">Upgrading
 <%=vars.product_name_long%></a>
+                       <ul>
+                           <li>
+                               <a 
href="/docs/guide/<%=vars.product_version_nodot%>/getting_started/upgrade/upgrade_planning.html">Planning
 an upgrade</a>
+                           </li>
+                           <li>
+                               <a 
href="/docs/guide/<%=vars.product_version_nodot%>/getting_started/upgrade/upgrade_rolling.html">Rolling
 upgrade</a>
+                           </li>
+                           <li>
+                               <a 
href="/docs/guide/<%=vars.product_version_nodot%>/getting_started/upgrade/upgrade_offline.html">Offline
 upgrade</a>
+                           </li>
+                           <li>
+                               <a 
href="/docs/guide/<%=vars.product_version_nodot%>/getting_started/upgrade/upgrade_clients.html">Upgrading
 clients</a>
+                           </li>
+                       </ul>
+                    </li>

Review comment:
       Within these new subnav entries, please capitalize to match what is done 
in the rest of the subnav.

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+---
+title:  Rolling Upgrade
+---
+
+<!--
+Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
+contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
+this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
+The ASF licenses this file to You under the Apache License, Version 2.0
+(the "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance with
+the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+limitations under the License.
+-->
+
+A rolling upgrade eliminates system downtime by keeping your existing 
distributed system running while you upgrade one member at a time.

Review comment:
       Maybe change _distributed system_ to _cluster_? I'm only marking this 
for the first instance within this subsection.

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+---
+title:  Planning an Upgrade
+---
+
+<!--
+Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
+contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
+this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
+The ASF licenses this file to You under the Apache License, Version 2.0
+(the "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance with
+the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+limitations under the License.
+-->
+
+Before you upgrade your system, back it up.  Make backup copies of all 
existing disk-stores,
+server-side code, configuration files, and data across the entire cluster.  To 
get a backup of the
+data that includes the most recent changes may require that traffic across the 
cluster is stopped
+before the backup is made.
+The discussion at [Creating Backups for System Recovery and Operational 
Management](../../managing/disk_storage/backup_restore_disk_store.html#backup_restore_disk_store)
+explains the process, and the
+[backup disk-store](../../tools_modules/gfsh/command-pages/backup.html) 
command reference page describes
+how to use the `gfsh backup disk-store` command to make a backup.
+
+## <a id="guidelines-upgrading" class="no-quick-link"></a>Guidelines for 
Upgrading
+
+-   Schedule your upgrade during a period of low user activity for your system 
and network.
+-   **Important:** After all locators have been upgraded, *do not start or 
restart any processes* that use the older version of the software. The older 
process will either not be allowed to join the distributed system or, if 
allowed to join, can potentially cause a deadlock.
+-   Verify that all members that you wish to upgrade are members of the same 
distributed system cluster.
+A list of cluster members will be output with the `gfsh` command:
+
+    ``` pre
+    gfsh>list members
+    ```
+
+-   Locate a copy of your system's startup script, if your site has one (most 
do). The startup script can be a handy reference for restarting upgraded 
locators and servers with the same `gfsh` command lines that were used in your 
current installation.
+
+- Identify how your current cluster configuration was specified. The way in 
which your cluster
+  configuration was created determines which commands you use to save and 
restore that cluster
+  configuration during the upgrade procedure.  There are two possibilites:
+
+  - With `gfsh` commands, relying on the underlying **cluster configuration 
service** to record the configuration: see [Exporting and Importing Cluster 
Configurations](../../configuring/cluster_config/export-import.html).
+  - With **XML properties** specified through the Java API or configuration 
files: see [Deploying Configuration Files without the Cluster Configuration 
Service](../../configuring/running/deploying_config_files.html).
+
+-   Do not modify region attributes or data, either via `gfsh` or `cache.xml` 
configuration, during the upgrade process.
+
+-   If possible, follow the [Rolling Upgrade](upgrade_rolling.html) procedure. 
 A multi-site
+installation can also do rolling upgrades within each site.  If a rolling 
upgrade is not possible,
+follow the [Off-Line Upgrade](upgrade_offline.html) procedure.
+A rolling upgrade is not possible for a cluster that has partitioned regions 
without redundancy.
+Without the redundancy, region entries will be lost when individual servers 
are taken out of the
+cluster during a rolling upgrade.
+
+## <a id="version_compatibilities" class="no-quick-link"></a>Version 
Compatibilities
+
+Your choice of upgrade procedure depends, in part, on the versions of 
<%=vars.product_name_long%> involved.
+
+- **Version Compatibility Between Peers and Cache Servers**
+
+    For best reliability and performance, all server components of a 
<%=vars.product_name%> system should run the same version of the software.
+    For the purposes of a rolling upgrade, you can have peers or cache servers 
running different minor
+    versions of <%=vars.product_name_long%> at the same time, as long as the 
major version is the same. For example,
+    some components can continue to run under version 
<%=vars.product_version_old_minor%> while you are in the process of upgrading to
+    version <%=vars.product_version%>.
+
+- **Version Compatibility Between Clients and Servers**
+
+    Client/server access is backward compatible. An 
<%=vars.product_name_long%> cluster can be accessed by clients using any 
previous version. However, clients
+    cannot connect to servers running older versions of 
<%=vars.product_name_long%>. For example, a client running 
<%=vars.product_name_long%> <%=vars.product_version_old_minor%> can access a 
cluster
+    running <%=vars.product_name_long%> <%=vars.product_version%>, but a 
client running <%=vars.product_name_long%> <%=vars.product_version%> could not 
connect to a cluster running <%=vars.product_name_long%> 
<%=vars.product_version_old_minor%>.
+
+- **Version Compatibility Between Sites in Multi-Site (WAN) Deployments**
+
+    In multi-site (WAN) deployments, sites should still be able to communicate 
with one another, even if they use different versions.
+
+## <a id="java-notes" class="no-quick-link"></a>Java Notes
+
+- To check your current Java version, type `java -version` at a command-line 
prompt.
+
+- <%=vars.product_name_long%> <%=vars.product_version%> requires Java SE 8, 
version 92 or a more recent version.

Review comment:
       I believe this is quite out of date.  Maybe revise to link to the Host 
Machine Requirements subsection, where the Java version is listed?  

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+---
+title:  Planning an Upgrade
+---
+
+<!--
+Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
+contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
+this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
+The ASF licenses this file to You under the Apache License, Version 2.0
+(the "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance with
+the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+limitations under the License.
+-->
+
+Before you upgrade your system, back it up.  Make backup copies of all 
existing disk-stores,
+server-side code, configuration files, and data across the entire cluster.  To 
get a backup of the
+data that includes the most recent changes may require that traffic across the 
cluster is stopped
+before the backup is made.
+The discussion at [Creating Backups for System Recovery and Operational 
Management](../../managing/disk_storage/backup_restore_disk_store.html#backup_restore_disk_store)
+explains the process, and the
+[backup disk-store](../../tools_modules/gfsh/command-pages/backup.html) 
command reference page describes
+how to use the `gfsh backup disk-store` command to make a backup.
+
+## <a id="guidelines-upgrading" class="no-quick-link"></a>Guidelines for 
Upgrading
+
+-   Schedule your upgrade during a period of low user activity for your system 
and network.
+-   **Important:** After all locators have been upgraded, *do not start or 
restart any processes* that use the older version of the software. The older 
process will either not be allowed to join the distributed system or, if 
allowed to join, can potentially cause a deadlock.
+-   Verify that all members that you wish to upgrade are members of the same 
distributed system cluster.
+A list of cluster members will be output with the `gfsh` command:
+
+    ``` pre
+    gfsh>list members
+    ```
+
+-   Locate a copy of your system's startup script, if your site has one (most 
do). The startup script can be a handy reference for restarting upgraded 
locators and servers with the same `gfsh` command lines that were used in your 
current installation.
+
+- Identify how your current cluster configuration was specified. The way in 
which your cluster
+  configuration was created determines which commands you use to save and 
restore that cluster
+  configuration during the upgrade procedure.  There are two possibilites:
+
+  - With `gfsh` commands, relying on the underlying **cluster configuration 
service** to record the configuration: see [Exporting and Importing Cluster 
Configurations](../../configuring/cluster_config/export-import.html).
+  - With **XML properties** specified through the Java API or configuration 
files: see [Deploying Configuration Files without the Cluster Configuration 
Service](../../configuring/running/deploying_config_files.html).
+
+-   Do not modify region attributes or data, either via `gfsh` or `cache.xml` 
configuration, during the upgrade process.
+
+-   If possible, follow the [Rolling Upgrade](upgrade_rolling.html) procedure. 
 A multi-site
+installation can also do rolling upgrades within each site.  If a rolling 
upgrade is not possible,
+follow the [Off-Line Upgrade](upgrade_offline.html) procedure.
+A rolling upgrade is not possible for a cluster that has partitioned regions 
without redundancy.
+Without the redundancy, region entries will be lost when individual servers 
are taken out of the
+cluster during a rolling upgrade.
+
+## <a id="version_compatibilities" class="no-quick-link"></a>Version 
Compatibilities
+
+Your choice of upgrade procedure depends, in part, on the versions of 
<%=vars.product_name_long%> involved.
+
+- **Version Compatibility Between Peers and Cache Servers**
+
+    For best reliability and performance, all server components of a 
<%=vars.product_name%> system should run the same version of the software.
+    For the purposes of a rolling upgrade, you can have peers or cache servers 
running different minor
+    versions of <%=vars.product_name_long%> at the same time, as long as the 
major version is the same. For example,
+    some components can continue to run under version 
<%=vars.product_version_old_minor%> while you are in the process of upgrading to
+    version <%=vars.product_version%>.
+
+- **Version Compatibility Between Clients and Servers**
+
+    Client/server access is backward compatible. An 
<%=vars.product_name_long%> cluster can be accessed by clients using any 
previous version. However, clients
+    cannot connect to servers running older versions of 
<%=vars.product_name_long%>. For example, a client running 
<%=vars.product_name_long%> <%=vars.product_version_old_minor%> can access a 
cluster
+    running <%=vars.product_name_long%> <%=vars.product_version%>, but a 
client running <%=vars.product_name_long%> <%=vars.product_version%> could not 
connect to a cluster running <%=vars.product_name_long%> 
<%=vars.product_version_old_minor%>.
+
+- **Version Compatibility Between Sites in Multi-Site (WAN) Deployments**
+
+    In multi-site (WAN) deployments, sites should still be able to communicate 
with one another, even if they use different versions.
+
+## <a id="java-notes" class="no-quick-link"></a>Java Notes
+
+- To check your current Java version, type `java -version` at a command-line 
prompt.
+
+- <%=vars.product_name_long%> <%=vars.product_version%> requires Java SE 8, 
version 92 or a more recent version.

Review comment:
       Actually, I think that this entire subsection (Java Notes) could be 
removed, and instead, add a bullet item in the _Guidelines for Upgrading_ that 
states that the upgrade planner should ensure that the machines hosting the 
cluster members meet the _Host Machine Requirements_ of the upgraded cluster.




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