juanotto commented on code in PR #23:
URL: 
https://github.com/apache/netbeans-antora-tutorials/pull/23#discussion_r2479285716


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modules/ROOT/pages/tutorials/nbm-selection-1.adoc:
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@@ -503,146 +503,160 @@ import org.openide.util.NbBundle;
 import org.openide.util.lookup.Lookups;
 import org.openide.windows.TopComponent;
 ----
-
-The line `associateLookup(Lookups.singleton(obj));` will create a `Lookup` 
that contains only one object - the new instance of `Event` - and assign that 
`Lookup` to be what is returned by `MyEditor.getLookup()`. While this is an 
artificial example, you can imagine how `Event` might represent a file, an 
entity in a database, or anything else you might want to edit or view. Probably 
you can also imagine one component that allows you to select or edit multiple 
unique instances of `Event`, which will be the subject of the next tutorial.
-
-To make your editor component at least somewhat interesting (though it doesn't 
actually edit anything), you set the text fields' values to values from the 
`Event`, so you have something to display.
++
+The line `associateLookup(Lookups.singleton(obj));` creates a `Lookup` 
containing one object - the new `Event` instance.
+This becomes what `MyEditor.getLookup()` returns. While this is a simple 
example, you can imagine `Event` representing a
+file, database entity, or anything else you want to edit or view. You could 
also have a component that lets you select
+or edit multiple `Event` instances, which is covered in the next tutorial.
++
+To make the editor component interesting (though it doesn't actually edit 
anything), you set the text fields to display
+values from the `Event`.
 
 
 == Running the Code
 
-Now you're ready to run the tutorial. Simply right click `EventManager`, the 
application which contains your three modules, and choose Run from the popup 
menu. When the IDE opens, simply choose Window > Open Editor to invoke your 
action. Do this a couple of times, so that there are several of your editor 
components open. Your singleton `MyViewer` window should also be open. Notice 
how the `MyViewer` window's contents change as you click different tabs, as 
shown here:
-
-image::tutorials/selection-1_result1.png[]
+Now you're ready to run the tutorial. Right click `EventManager` and choose 
Run. When the IDE opens, choose
+Window > Open Editor to invoke your action. Do this a few times to open 
several editor components. Your `MyViewer`
+window should also be open. Notice how the `MyViewer` window content changes 
as you click different tabs:
 
-If you click in the Viewer window, or close all of the editor windows, note 
that the text changes to "[no selection]", as shown below:
+image::tutorials/selection-1_nb27_result1.png[]
 
-image::tutorials/selection-1_result2.png[]
+If you click in the Viewer window or close all editor windows, the text 
changes to "[no selection]".
 
-NOTE:  If you do not see the `MyViewer` window, you probably did not check the 
checkbox in the wizard to open it on system start - simply go to the Window 
menu and choose MyViewer to display it.
+NOTE: If you don't see the `MyViewer` window, you probably didn't check the 
"open on system start" checkbox in the
+wizard. Go to the Window menu and choose MyViewer to display it.
 
 
 == So, What's the Point?
 
-So the key point of this tutorial is the way the code is split into three 
modules: the My Viewer module knows nothing about the My Editor module, and 
either one can run by itself. They only share a common dependency on My API. 
That means two things: 1. My Viewer and My Editor can be developed and shipped 
independently, and 2. Any module that wants to provide a different sort of 
editor than My Editor can do so, and the viewer component will work perfectly 
with it, as long as the replacement editor offers an instance of `Event` from 
its Lookup.
-
-To really picture the value of this, imagine `Event` were something much more 
complex; imagine that `MyEditor` is an image editor, and ` Event` represents an 
image being edited. The thing that's powerful here is that you could replace 
`MyEditor` with, say, an SVG vector-based editor, and the viewer component 
(presumably showing attributes of the currently edited image) will work 
transparently with that new editor. It is this model of doing things that is 
the reason you can add new tools into the NetBeans IDE that work against Java 
files, and they will work in different versions of NetBeans, and that you can 
have an alternate editor (such as the form editor) for Java files and all the 
components and actions that work against Java files still work when the form 
editor is used.
+The key point is how the code is split into three modules: My Viewer knows 
nothing about My Editor, and either can run
+independently. They only share a dependency on My API. This means:
 
-This is very much the way NetBeans works with Java and other source files-in 
their case, the thing that is available from the editor's Lookup is a ` 
xref:wiki::wiki/DevFaqDataObject.adoc[DataObject]`, and components like 
Navigator and the Property Sheet are simply watching what object is being made 
available by the focused `TopComponent`.
+1. My Viewer and My Editor can be developed and shipped independently
+2. Any module can provide a different editor and the viewer will work with it, 
as long as the new editor offers an
+`Event` from its Lookup
 
-Another valuable thing about this approach is that often people are migrating 
existing applications to the NetBeans Platform. The object that is part of the 
data model, in that case, is probably existing, working code that should not be 
changed in order to integrate it into NetBeans. By keeping the data model's API 
in a separate module, the NetBeans integration can be kept separate from the 
core business logic.
+To understand the value, imagine `Event` is something complex - say `MyEditor` 
is an image editor and `Event` represents
+an image being edited. You could replace `MyEditor` with an SVG vector editor, 
and the viewer (showing image attributes)
+would work transparently with the new editor. This is why you can add new 
tools to NetBeans IDE that work with Java
+files - they work across different NetBeans versions, and alternative editors 
(like the form editor) still work with all
+components and actions that work with Java files.
 
+This is how NetBeans IDE works with Java and other source files. The thing 
available from the editor's Lookup is

Review Comment:
   I'll go with just Netbeans, more concise



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