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commit c4f50cbfc7c0701139ea00d7d4f3c3fbc7014541
Author: 吴晟 Wu Sheng <wu.sh...@foxmail.com>
AuthorDate: Tue Jan 16 20:55:35 2024 +0800

    Polish words in SWIP-3.md (#11786)
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 docs/en/swip/SWIP-3.md | 19 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/en/swip/SWIP-3.md b/docs/en/swip/SWIP-3.md
index 5a50b7ad2b..3ec40aa094 100644
--- a/docs/en/swip/SWIP-3.md
+++ b/docs/en/swip/SWIP-3.md
@@ -1,19 +1,20 @@
+# Support RocketMQ Monitoring
 ## Motivation
-RocketMQ is a cloud native messaging and streaming platform, making it simple 
to build event-driven applications。Now that Skywalking has the capability to 
monitor OpenTelemetry metrics, I want to add RocketMQ monitoring via the 
OpenTelemetry Collector, which fetches metrics from the RocketMQ Exporter
+RocketMQ is a cloud native messaging and streaming platform, making it simple 
to build event-driven applications. Now that Skywalking can monitor 
OpenTelemetry metrics, I want to add RocketMQ monitoring via the OpenTelemetry 
Collector, which fetches metrics from the RocketMQ Exporter
 
 ## Architecture Graph
 There is no significant architecture-level change.
 
 ## Proposed Changes
-```rocketmq-exporter``` collects metrics from rocketmq and transport the data 
to opentelemetry collector,using skyWalking openTelemetry receiver to receive 
these metrics。
-Provide cluster ,broker and topic dimensions monitoring.
+```rocketmq-exporter``` collects metrics from RocketMQ and transport the data 
to OpenTelemetry collector, using SkyWalking openTelemetry receiver to receive 
these metrics。
+Provide cluster, broker, and topic dimensions monitoring.
 
 ### RocketMQ Cluster Supported Metrics
 
 | Monitoring Panel                           |Unit        | Metric Name        
                                                     | Description              
                                                | Data Source      |
 
|--------------------------------------------|------------|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|------------------|
-| Messages Produced Today                    | Count      | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_messages_produced_today                          | The 
number of the cluster messages produced today.                       | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
-| Messages Consumed Today                    | Count      | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_messages_consumed_today                          | The 
number of the cluster messages consumed today.                       | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
+| Messages Produced Today                    | Count      | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_messages_produced_today                          | The 
number of cluster messages produced today.                       | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
+| Messages Consumed Today                    | Count      | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_messages_consumed_today                          | The 
number of cluster messages consumed today.                       | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
 | Total Producer Tps                         | Msg/sec    | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_total_producer_tps                               | The 
number of messages produced per second.                              | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
 | Total Consume Tps                          | Msg/sec    | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_total_consumer_tps                               | The 
number of messages consumed per second.                              | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
 | Producer Message Size                      | Bytes/sec  | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_producer_message_size                            | The 
max size of a message produced per second.                           | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
@@ -22,9 +23,9 @@ Provide cluster ,broker and topic dimensions monitoring.
 | Messages Consumed Until Yesterday          | Count      | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_messages_consumed_until_yesterday                | The 
total number of messages read until 12 o'clock last night.           | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
 | Max Consumer Latency                       | ms         | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_max_consumer_latency                             | The 
max number of consumer latency.                                      | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
 | Max CommitLog Disk Ratio                   | %          | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_max_commitLog_disk_ratio                         | The 
max utilization ratio of the commit log disk.                        | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
-| CommitLog Disk Ratio                       | %          | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_commitLog_disk_ratio                             | The 
utilization ratio of the commit log disk per brokerIp.               | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
-| Pull ThreadPool Queue Head Wait Time       | ms         | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_pull_threadPool_queue_head_wait_time             | The 
wait time in milliseconds for pulling threadPool queue per brokerIp. | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
-| Send ThreadPool Queue Head Wait Time       | ms         | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_send_threadPool_queue_head_wait_time             | The 
wait time in milliseconds for sending threadPool queue per brokerIp. | RocketMQ 
Exporter |
+| CommitLog Disk Ratio                       | %          | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_commitLog_disk_ratio                             | The 
utilization ratio of the commit log disk per broker IP.               | 
RocketMQ Exporter |
+| Pull ThreadPool Queue Head Wait Time       | ms         | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_pull_threadPool_queue_head_wait_time             | The 
wait time in milliseconds for pulling threadPool queue per broker IP. | 
RocketMQ Exporter |
+| Send ThreadPool Queue Head Wait Time       | ms         | 
meter_rocketmq_cluster_send_threadPool_queue_head_wait_time             | The 
wait time in milliseconds for sending threadPool queue per broker IP. | 
RocketMQ Exporter |
 
 ### RocketMQ Broker Supported Metrics
 
@@ -57,4 +58,4 @@ no breaking changes.
 
 ## General usage docs
 
-This feature is out of box.
\ No newline at end of file
+This feature is out of the box.

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