Authors, I have read draft-ietf-nvo3-use-case-07 and here's my review.
It has been an easy and pleasant read since the text is clear and well
written. The document helps grasping the potential of nvo3 in the
context of data centers and to create a mental image of how things
might interact together.
I’d like just to point some suggestions:
Introduction
Paragraph 1
> o Independent address spaces in individual virtual networks such as
> MAC, IP, TCP/UDP etc.
General comment:
I would add VLAN to the list to emphasize that it’s one of the major
constraint nvo3 helps alleviate.
Suggestion:
o Independent address spaces in individual virtual networks such as
MAC, VLAN, IP, TCP/UDP etc.
Figure 2
General comment: I haven’t figured what “/S” means in “NVE1/S”, etc,
that should be more explicit.
General comment: Throughout the text the authors use “Data Center(s)”,
“data center(s)”, either with or without capitalization without
following a coherent style.
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Thanks
Nicolas
nbouliane at jive.com
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