First of all, I support the draft to be published as RFC.
Here are some comments for the improvement.
General:
In section 3.4. IP multicast in the underlay
- The NVE only supports the basic IGMP/MLD snooping function, let
the TSs routers handling the application specific multicast. This
scheme doesn't utilize the underlay IP multicast protocols.
-
- The NVE can act as a pseudo multicast router for the directly
attached VMs and support proper mapping of IGMP/MLD's messages to
the messages needed by the underlay IP multicast protocols.
Is there an unnecessary dash '-' between the two sentence ?
In section 5.1. Multicast-agnostic NVEs
[...]in the multicast stream to send back IGMP/MLD reports. In order for
MSN get the updated multicast group information, the MSN can also
Suggested text as follow:
[...]in the multicast stream to send back IGMP/MLD reports. In order for
MSN to get the updated multicast group information, the MSN can also
Cheers,
Nicolas
On Fri, Jan 22, 2016 at 7:15 AM, Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)
<[email protected]> wrote:
> WG
>
> I am going to let this last call run for a couple more weeks as I have not
> seen any comments.
>
> The new closing date is Friday 5th Feb 2016.
>
> Regards
>
> Matthew
>
> From: Dacheng Zhang <[email protected]> on behalf of Matthew Bocci
> <[email protected]>
> Date: Tuesday, 5 January 2016 at 10:40
> To: NVO3 <[email protected]>
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> Subject: [nvo3] WG last call for draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework-01
>
> This email begins a two week working group last call for
> draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework-01.txt.
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> Please review the draft and post any comments to the NVO3 working group
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> This working group last call will close on Friday 21st January 2016.
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