David,
thanks for this.
/Loa
On 2016-03-07 04:06, Black, David wrote:
Loa,
Thanks for the review and suggestions for acronym expansions.
Regarding TTLs:
Section 3.1.2 TTL Considerations
Are the TTLs (in the case a L3 network carrying L3 traffic) independent?
They could be. Section 3.1.2 is solely about the carried traffic (L3 Service,
L2 Service), and does not have anything to say about the TTLs used in the
underlay. We could add a sentence about the latter point (underlay manages its
own TTLs, including relationship [if any] to TTLs of carried traffic).
Thanks, --David
-----Original Message-----
From: nvo3 [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Loa Andersson
Sent: Thursday, January 07, 2016 5:16 AM
To: Bocci, Matthew (Matthew); NVO3
Subject: Re: [nvo3] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-nvo3-arch-04.txt
Working Group,
I re-read the document now, I like the document, it is clear and well-
written. It is is ready for publication as a Informational RFC, some
small nits, questions and suggestions.
Nits:
Terminology - NIC needs to be expanded.
3.4 - VM is not expanded (maybe even an entry in the terminology section
is motivated).
Section 3.1.2 TTL Considerations
Are the TTLs (in the case a L3 network carrying L3 traffic) independent?
Section 5.5 ARP is not expanded; I would support a request to the RFC
Editor to make it well-know, but as long as it isn't it should be
expanded, when used first time.
I would have thought that familiarity with the NVO3 problem statement
and frame would be required. At least an informative reference and a
sentence pointing out this work would be good.
/Loa
On 2016-01-05 18:38, Bocci, Matthew (Matthew) wrote:
This email begins a two week working group last call for
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This working group last call will close on Friday 21st January 2016.
Best regards
Matthew and Benson
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