Brian, thanks for your review. Yizhou, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Feb 6, 2018, at 6:46 PM, Liyizhou <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thanks Brian. > > I will add " An IP address can be in either IPv4 or IPv6 format." to Section > 1.2 Target Scenarios as below. > > Section 1.2 Target Scenarios > .... In the Split-NVE architecture, the external NVE may be able to reach > multiple MAC and IP addresses via a TSI. *An IP address can be in either IPv4 > or IPv6 format.* For example, ..... > > Rgds, > Yizhou > > -----Original Message----- > From: Brian Carpenter [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Wednesday, February 07, 2018 6:32 AM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13 > > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review result: Ready with Issues > > Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-exp-codepoints-04 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2018-02-07 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-20 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22 > > Summary: Ready (with minor issue) > -------- > > Comment: > -------- > > This is a Last Call review despite the subject field. > > Minor issue: > ------------ > > Req-10: The protocol MUST allow an End Device initiating a request to > add, remove or update address(es) associated with a TSI instance on > the external NVE. Addresses can be expressed in different formats, > for example, MAC, IP or pair of IP and MAC. > > Here and elsewhere, it seems necessary to specify that an IP address can be > in either IPv4 or IPv6 format. (This is implied in Table 1 and at the end of > Appendix A, but that's quite well hidden.) I suggest clarifying this early, > in Section 1.2 "Target Scenarios". > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ nvo3 mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nvo3
