Hi Jim, Thank you very much for your review! We have removed the “Conventions Used in this Document” as per Lars’ comments, and updated all the references as per your request.
Thanks, Jorge From: Jim Guichard via Datatracker <[email protected]> Date: Thursday, April 20, 2023 at 6:00 PM To: The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, Sam Aldrin <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-nvo3-evpn-applicability-05: (with COMMENT) CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext for additional information. Jim Guichard has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-nvo3-evpn-applicability-05: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nvo3-evpn-applicability/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- This is a nicely written document and I have no specific technical comments. >From an editorial perspective: - The placement of Section 6 "Conventions Used in this Document" is odd as it appears after the conclusion section of the document. I would suggest moving it closer to the beginning of the document. - There are several references that are outdated so please correct these: == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of draft-ietf-nvo3-encap-08 == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping-08 == Outdated reference: A later version (-10) exists of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-09 == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-mcast-07 == Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-geneve-04 == Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-04 == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of draft-sajassi-bess-secure-evpn-05 == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of draft-ietf-bess-rfc7432bis-04
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