Thanks Alan and Anurag for the very quick reviews! I'll get busy on the items you've pointed out.
-renee On Fri, Mar 13, 2009 at 10:50:28AM -0400, Anurag S. Maskey wrote: > > > Renee Danson wrote: >> I've made the following doc updates, in preparation for our PSARC >> commitment review: >> >> * Completed the (hopefully!) final update of the Phase 1 Spec, found at >> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/nwam/p1spec >> > Section 3.1 > > - "default-domain" property: system/identity:domain is not > refreshed/enabled. It reads from /etc/defaultdomain to set the > domainname(1M). > - {ipfilter-v6,ipnat,ippool}-config-file: rather than copying the files > into place, set the appropriate service's config/config_file property. > - ipfilter-config-file: firewall_config_default/policy is set to > "custom" and firewall_config_default/custom_policy_file is set to the > ipfilter-config-file. > > Section 4.2.2 and 4.2.3 > > - host-files, ipfilter-config-file, ipfilter-v6-config-files point to > files without the ".default" (or .dfl) extension > > Section 7.2 and 8.2 > > - /var/run/ should be /etc/svc/volatile/nwam/ >> * Updated the man pages; there might be a few more tweaks on those >> tomorrow. They're found at >> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/nwam/p1spec/manpages >> > nwamcfg(1M) > > - Having the syntax for the conditional expressions in a table (like in > 3.1) or a bulletted-list makes it easier to see the different kinds of > expressions and also its robustness. > > nwamadm (1M) > > - begin picky: putting "profile-type" and "profile-name" within "<...>" > - profile type is "loc" and not "location" (keeping it consistent with > nwamcfg(1M)). also in Example 3. > - "help" sub-command missing: "Print a usage message with short > descriptions for each subcommand. " > - How about another example listing NCPs and NCUs (NCUs are indented by > one space for clarity) > > Example 4: List all NCPs > bash-3.2# nwamadm list -t ncp > TYPE PROFILE STATE ncp User > online ncu bge0 online > ncu bge1 disabled > ncp Automatic offline > > >> * Added links to the GUI man pages provided by Darren, off the same >> page as the ON man pages above. >> >> * Uploaded the 20qs to the opensolaris site, linked off the main NWAM >> wiki page, found at >> http://wikis.sun.com/display/NWAM/Home >> > Question 5: > > - lib/svc/method/net-loc (not net-location) > > Question 11: > > - doors are created in /etc/svc/volatile and /etc/svc/volatile/nwam > - soft reset file is at /etc/svc/volatile/nwam/nwamd_soft_reset > > Question 13: > > - /etc/nwam/known-wlan.conf missing > - nwam_soft_reset location has to be updated > > Thanks, > Anurag >
