Even better, thanks! On Thu, Jul 15, 2010 at 2:31 PM, Michael D Adams <[email protected]>wrote:
> On Thu, Jul 15, 2010 at 2:11 PM, David Recordon <[email protected]> > wrote: > > On Thu, Jul 15, 2010 at 1:36 PM, Zeltsan, Zachary (Zachary) > >> “The client makes the following request at an arbitrary but reasonable > >> interval which MUST NOT exceed the minimum interval rate provided by > >> the authorization server (if present via the "interval" parameter).” > >> > >> My understanding is that the intervals between the client’s subsequent > >> requests must not be less than the value provided by the “interval” > >> parameter (if it is present). If that is correct than the intervals > between > >> the subsequent requests MUST exceed (or be equal to) the value of the > >> “interval” parameter. > > > > Thanks! Reworded to "The client makes the following request at an > arbitrary > > but reasonable interval which MUST NOT be less than the minimum interval > > rate provided by the authorization server" > > It still sounds confusing to me. Part of the problem is that we're > talking both about an interval (a length of time) and a frequency > (requests per unit of time). > > How about: > > The client makes the next request after an arbitrary but reasonable > length of time, which MUST be longer than or equal to the minimum > length of time provided by the authorization server in the "interval" > parameter if present. > > > I changed "following" to "next" because the former makes it sound like > the next paragraph will have details about the request. > > I changed "at an arbitrary" to "after an arbitrary" since we're > talking here about lengths of time. > > I replaced "interval" with "length of time" to make it clear we're > talking about the length of time and not the corresponding frequency. > > Mike > --mdawaffe > _______________________________________________ > OAuth mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth >
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