+1, this wording is much clearer to me, too -- justin
On Tue, 2011-09-13 at 19:25 -0400, Greg Brail wrote: > This part of section 1.1 is confusing to me and I stumble whenever I > read it – I see that Brian Eaton suggested looking at it a while back > but I don’t think it got changed: > > > > “OAuth includes four roles working together to grant and provide > > access to protected resources - access restricted resources > requiring > > authentication:” > > > > I would suggest something simpler, such as: > > > > “OAuth includes four roles that work together to grant and provide > access to protected resources that require authentication.” > > > > > > Gregory Brail | Technology | Apigee | +1-650-937-9302 > > > > _______________________________________________ OAuth mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
