Should simple read "the attacker's user-agent is sent to". EH
> -----Original Message----- > From: Songhaibin [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Wednesday, March 07, 2012 6:11 PM > To: Eran Hammer; [email protected]; [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; Martin Stiemerling > Subject: RE: tsv-dir review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-23 > > > > 5. Section 10.6, paragraph 2, second sentence, When the attacker is > > > sent to.../ When the authorization code request is sent to... > > > > Not sure what you mean. > > I mean you may have to change "the attacker is sent to..." to "the > authorization code is sent to...". > > BR, > -Haibin > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Eran Hammer [mailto:[email protected]] > > Sent: Thursday, March 08, 2012 8:16 AM > > To: Songhaibin; [email protected]; > > [email protected] > > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; Martin Stiemerling > > Subject: RE: tsv-dir review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-23 > > > > Thanks Haibin. > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > From: Songhaibin [mailto:[email protected]] > > > Sent: Wednesday, February 15, 2012 1:33 AM > > > > > Nits: > > > 1. Section 3.1, paragraph 4, the last sentence is confusing, is it > > > the authorization server who sends the request to the authorization > endpoint? > > > Or is it the resource owner? > > > > The client. Added clarification in section 3. > > > > > 2. Section 3.1.1, paragraph 3, "...where the order of values does not > matter.." > > > I think a little clarification on the reason for this would be > > > better for people like me. > > > > I don't think we need to explain it, but it's to meet typical developers' > > expectations. > > > > > 3. Section 3.2, paragraph 4, the last sentence is confusing, is it > > > the authorization server who sends request to the token endpoint? > > > > Same as #1. > > > > > 4. Section 10.12, paragraph 4, should the terminology "end-user" be > > > changed to "resource owner"? There are same issues in other places > > > of this document. > > > > Changed some. Clarified end-user in the intro. > > > > > 5. Section 10.6, paragraph 2, second sentence, When the attacker is > > > sent to.../ When the authorization code request is sent to... > > > > Not sure what you mean. > > > > EH > > _______________________________________________ OAuth mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
