Hi, A couple editorial remarks:
When introducing the first 2 examples, maybe merge the two paragraphs, starting with "The following non-normative example shows …". Similarly, you talk about line wraps for display purpose but the examples don't need/use wrapping. Other than that, ready to go to the RFC state if you ask me. Le mar. 23 déc. 2014 19:02, Richer, Justin P. <[email protected]> a écrit : > This draft makes two changes: > > - Removal of the "resource_id" input parameter, whose purpose has been > largely supplanted by requiring authorization to call the introspection > endpoint. I also don't know of any implementations that make use of this > parameter. If there's later consensus on defining more context on the way > in, we can easily have an extension for that. > > - Re-shuffling of the examples out of an appendix and into the sections > that they represent; it reads better this way. > > -- Justin > > On Dec 23, 2014, at 12:59 PM, <[email protected]> < > [email protected]> wrote: > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Web Authorization Protocol Working > Group of the IETF. > > > > Title : OAuth 2.0 Token Introspection > > Author : Justin Richer > > Filename : draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-04.txt > > Pages : 13 > > Date : 2014-12-23 > > > > Abstract: > > This specification defines a method for a protected resource to query > > an OAuth 2.0 authorization server to determine the active state of an > > OAuth 2.0 token and to determine meta-information about this token. > > OAuth 2.0 deployments can use this method to convey information about > > the authorization context of the token from the authorization server > > to the protected resource. > > > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-introspection/ > > > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-04 > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-oauth-introspection-04 > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > _______________________________________________ > > OAuth mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth > > _______________________________________________ > OAuth mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth >
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