Thanks, I fixed my finger dyslexia for the next draft.

I changed it to t_m rather than “t”  I think that is clearer.  If I were to do 
it the other way XML2RFC would have double quotes in the text version.

John B. 
> On Jul 7, 2015, at 9:38 PM, William Denniss <wdenn...@google.com> wrote:
> 
> In version 14, there's a typo on this line ("deso") in Section 7.2:
> 
> `"plain" method deso not protect`
> 
> Also, in the 1.1 Protocol Flow diagram, regarding the text:
> 
> `+ t(code_verifier), t`
> 
> I wonder if it makes more sense to represent as `+ t(code_verifier), "t"` 
> (note the quotes on the second 't') given that it's a string representation 
> of the method that's being sent?
> 
> 
> On Mon, Jul 6, 2015 at 4:05 PM, <internet-dra...@ietf.org 
> <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>> wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Web Authorization Protocol Working Group of 
> the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Proof Key for Code Exchange by OAuth Public Clients
>         Authors         : Nat Sakimura
>                           John Bradley
>                           Naveen Agarwal
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-oauth-spop-14.txt
>         Pages           : 20
>         Date            : 2015-07-06
> 
> Abstract:
>    OAuth 2.0 public clients utilizing the Authorization Code Grant are
>    susceptible to the authorization code interception attack.  This
>    specification describes the attack as well as a technique to mitigate
>    against the threat through the use of Proof Key for Code Exchange
>    (PKCE, pronounced "pixy").
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-spop/ 
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-spop/>
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-spop-14 
> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-spop-14>
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-oauth-spop-14 
> <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-oauth-spop-14>
> 
> 
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