I made a (late) review of draft-ietf-oauth-proof-of-possession-06  and as with 
draft-ietf-oauth-pop-architecture-05 I think it’s in really good shape and it’s 
not much to comment on.


The only thing that I could mention is that the introduction of the “jwk” 
member in the following text is a bit abrupt:


When the key held by the presenter is an asymmetric private key, the
   "jwk" member is a JSON Web Key (JWK) 
[JWK<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-proof-of-possession-06#ref-JWK>]
 representing the
   corresponding asymmetric public key.


It’s the first time the member is introduced. Same on “jwe".

Otherwise, as I said. It’s in really good shape.

/ Erik

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