Hi,

generally, I considers this a highly valuable contribution and support to move it forward.

Some nits:

section 7.3, last paragraph: "... as it is less susceptible
to misconfigured routing and client side firewalls Note ..." - I think a period is missing between "firewalls" and "Note" potentially a line break would be appropriate.

section 8.2 - The term PKCE is used in the second paragraph but not defined before the fourth paragraph. I suggest to define PKCE on first use.

best regards,
Torsten.


Am 21.07.2016 um 10:05 schrieb Hannes Tschofenig:
Hi all,

William has submitted an update, as promised during the OAuth WG session
on Monday. Hence, we will start a Last Call for comments on the "OAuth
2.0 for Native Apps"  specification.

The document can be found here:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-native-apps-03

Please have your comments in no later than August 8th.

Ciao
Hannes & Derek




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