On Apr 17, 2018, at 12:24, Carsten Bormann <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 7159 (Obsoleted by RFC 8259)

That also gives rise to:

Minor technical comment: 2.3 claims that JSON can be in different encodings.  
This is no longer really the case with RFC 8259 (see Section 8.1).  Please fix 
the wording to remove the untrue claim (no pun intended).

Major technical comment: Section 3.9 recommends the use of media types 
of the form application/example+jwt.
I don’t find a registration for the RFC 6839 structured syntax
suffix "+jwt".  If this recommendation is desired, this document will
need to register it (preferred) or refer to a document that does.

Nit: Section 1.2 could use the newer template (as per RFC 8174) here.
Nit: Section 3.6: s/use/use or admit the use of/
Nit: Section 3.8: s/not/not present or not/

I think these are all solved in an obvious way, and once done I strongly 
support this document to go forward.

Grüße, Carsten

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