Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- -- Section 2 -- invalid_target The requested resource is invalid, unknown, or malformed. For clarity, I suggest adding "missing" to the list, as specified in Section 2.1, '...and MAY fail requests that omit the parameter with an "invalid_target" error.' The authorization server SHOULD audience restrict issued access tokens to the resource(s) indicated by the "resource" parameter. I can't parse this sentence. I see "audience" as a verb, and don't understand. AH. I read later in the document and figured out my problem: I think it would help if you hyphenate "audience-restrict" (and "audience-restricted" later). No? _______________________________________________ OAuth mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
