Thanks George for the super thorough review and feedback! 
Inline

  >  Section 1. Introduction
     ��� second line: scenario should be plural --> scenarios
     ��� second sentence: "are not ran by" --> "are not run by"
    �� cofidentiality --> confidentiality
Fixed. Thanks!

>     Section 2.2.1 Authentication Information Claims
     ��� I'm not sure that this definition of `auth_time` allows for the 
    case where a user is required to solve an additional challenge.
If the challenge entails going back to the AS, then I believe the language (in 
the initial paragraph of 2.2.1 and in auth_time itself)  accommodates for that 
and does require the auth_time to be updated. 
If you hit the AS and present an authentication factor (such as your challenge) 
and obtain a new token in the process, the auth_time will reflect the time of 
your latest authentication just like an id_token would in the same 
circumstances (think protected route in a web app requiring step up auth) and 
(likely) associated session artifacts (think RTs or cookies with sliding 
expiration, the challenge would count as activity and move the expiration).

>     ��� I think there is a difference between session_start_time and 
> last 
    auth_time. This feels more like it's defining the session_start_time 
    concept.
>    �� These same issues can apply to the `acr` and `amr` values as well.
Per the above, the intent is more to express the last time the user performed 
any authentication action rather than the start time. The intent is to provide 
information as current as possible, as it might be relevant to the RS decisions 
whereas the history before current conditions might not be consequential.

  >   �� Even if for this secondary challenge a new refresh_token is 
issued, 
    it is unlikely many relying parties will want to treat that as issuing a 
    new session. The goal is to keep the user logged in to a single session.
Could you expand on the practical implications of the above? The intent isn't 
as much to reflect session identifying information per se, but to provide the 
RS with the most up to date information about the circumstances in which the 
current AT was obtained. The fact that a session was initially established 
using acr level 0 doesn’t really matter if the AT I am receiving now has been 
obtained after a stepup that brought acr to 1, if my RS cares auth 
authentication levels my authorization decision shouldn't be influenced by 
whether somewhere the session artifact didn’t change its sessionID after the 
stepup. Same for acr, auth_time

>     Section 2.2.3 Authorization Claims
     �� I find the statement "All the individual scope strings in the scope 
    claim MUST have meaning for the resource indicated in the aud claim" 
    somewhat problematic. In many deployments today for 1st party clients to 
    the authorization server and taking into account mobile applications, 
    the access token most like contains scopes for many of the 1st party 
    backend APIs. It's possible to get around this by setting the 'aud' 
    claim to something like "com.example.apis" and hence all the issued 
    scopes map to that audience claim but that is just working around the 
    MUST in the spec. Given the lack of specificity of the 'aud' claim and 
    the 'resource indicator' claim for that matter, pretty much anything can 
    be made to comply. In that context, it seems like RECOMMEND is a better 
    normative clause.
For 1st party solutions, I would argue that delegation might not be the right 
primitive hence I wouldn't necessarily use scopes to express permissions; but 
that's a rabbit hole I'll try to avoid for the time being __
For the aud, I think that what you characterized as workaround would actually 
be by design. The aud defines the applicability of the current token, so that 
in case of leakage the blast radius of the incident can be contained. If the 
solution designed decides that this particular token should be reusable across 
multiple assets, I think it makes sense for the aud to reflect that explicitly. 
That's the system designing volunteering a scope xpansion of the scope, and 
given that it has security implications I think it's good to require it to be 
an explicit, opt in action. At the same time, given that scopes are often used 
to define permissions, I believe it makes sense to find mechanisms to minimize 
the chance that RSes would misinterpret the applicability of a scope (see 
discussion with Takahiko/Nikos). Summing all the above, I'd be inclined to keep 
the MUST.

> Section 3. Requesting a JWT Access Token
     �� Per my comments above I suspect that requiring all JWT access 
tokens 
    to include an audience claim will just devolve to audience claims that 
    are somewhat pointless (in order to meet this MUST in the spec). Given 
    the mobile app environment today, it is unreasonable to ask the mobile 
    apps to downscope every access token before making an API call to the 
    backend APIs which is what the spirit of audience and resource 
    indicators seem to imply.
Partly addressed in the preceding point, but this is a great opportunity to 
clarify the intent further. The mobile client isn't required to downscope; 
rather, the fact that a token cab be applied to a broad range of API should be 
clearly identified and expressed by the logical audience. The system designer 
can even choose to have a single token that can be used to call any API, 
containing every scope for every API; the profile only asks for this choice to 
be manifest, by choosing an appropriate audience identifier and acknowledging 
that all the scopes in the token are applicable to the same logical resource 
(that is, the aggregate of all the APIs). 

     >  �� Why MUST the AS reject a request with more than one resource 
    parameter? If a request comes in with no resource parameter and multiple 
    scopes the AS is not required to reject that request. Is there much of a 
    semantic difference between the two? In the case of no resource 
    parameter and multiple scopes the AS might issue an access token with 
    multiple audience values (as is allowed by RFC 7519).
This is another consequence of making extra clear what the token refers to, and 
what the intended semantic of the scopes is. The idea is that the token is 
always restricted to ONE specific audience. The profile allows for different 
mechanisms for the AS to determine what value the audience should be, including 
via inference from scopes, but coherently with the scope confusion prevention 
principle, if that inference cannot lead to a single resource identifier in the 
audience, the request should be rejected.
The intent is really to be as simple as unambiguous as possible, and capture 
what most mainstream providers already do in JWT ATs. If a RS has more 
sophisticated requirements, they can always decide to do more and not follow 
the interop profile. Defining more complex rules to prevent scope/resource 
association confusion simply doesn’t seem to be justified by the frequency of 
the scenario in the wild.


>  Also, the audience 
    claim is not solely for resource indicator values but is defined to just 
    be a string. To me it feels like the text is implying that the only 
    valid audience value is also a resource indicator (which from previous 
    discussions on the list it was implied they have a slightly different 
    semantic).
Section 3 of the profile does define aud as a resource indicator, enumerating 
an exhaustive list of possible requests that all end in a resource indicator as 
aud, or an error. Did I miss some cases? I don’t recall specifics about aud 
values in this profile having other possible values, sorry for having missed 
that. Do you have a snippet referring to those discussions? Thx

    >  �� The model described here works well if myco.example really only 
    provides a single service. But if instead myco.example provides multiple 
    services each with their own endpoints (srva.myco.example, 
    srvb.myco.example) and scopes, for me this model begins to break down. 
    Either mobile apps are required to downscope all tokens to just the 
    service they are calling at that point in time (which can have latency 
    and connectivity issues), or myco.example has to create a generic 
    "audience" string that represents all of example.com which doesn't seem 
    to be the spirit of the existing specs.
I think that the granularity of the calls is fully within the control of the 
designer. If srva.myco.example and srvb.myco.example share analogous 
characteristics (same policies, lifecycle, resource ownership, etc) them it's 
perfectly valid to assign a logical myco.example audience encompassing them 
all, regardless of deployment model. If there are differences in terms of 
policies, auth strength requirements, lifecycle, risk and impact of a leak, or 
any other boundary, then the audience requirement will guarantee that those 
differences are reflected in tokens requested and cached, in the way in which 
access is partitioned, and so on and so forth. If there are security 
requirements such as the ones enumerated, the latency and connectivity issues 
aren’t a blocking factor; and if there aren't, nothing prevents you from having 
a logical audience value. From the expressive power point of view, the 
requirement of having a single audience doens't prevent you from doing any of 
the single token logic you are hinting at- especially if you plan to use 
specialized scopes anyway.

   >   �� In summary, I feel that this text is binding too tightly resource 
    indicators to the audience claim. What is described is perfectly 
    reasonable in a use case that is applying resource indicators in this 
    way but is not indicative of the widely deployed models that already exist.
We might have different experiences here. The JWT access tokens from popular 
products I studied in the research I presented in Stuttgart were almost all 
using the aud claim in this way. I am sure that there are other models, and 
there was at least one exception, but in interop terms this seems to be the 
most common way of using JWT for ATs- and it has the advantage of being very 
simple and unambiguous.

> Section 4. Validating JWT Access Tokens
     �� Step 4. -- Can we change the wording to not require resource 
    indicators? What about... "The resource server MUST validate that the 
    'aud' claim contains a string that represents the audience of this 
    resource server."
Could you make an example in which you'd want to use an identifier that is not 
a resource indicator? Given that we have the spec, and "audience of the 
resource server" seems to be the exact semantic of resource indicators, it 
seemed a slam dunk to use it here... 

   > Section 5. "cross-JWT confusion"
     �� I think there may be confusion around what is meant by "distinct 
    resources". In my example above, are srva.myco.example and 
    srvb.myco.example "distinct resources"? or is the goal here to say that 
    we want different audience values generated for cross-organization 
    resources. For example, are mail.google.com and youtube.com "distinct 
    resources"? or would an audience for google suffice in meeting the 
    meaning of this paragraph?
I think the key point here is - we don’t know. I agree the language isn't clear 
there. Let me expand on the intent, and perhaps we can get to a better 
formulation.
OAuth2 doesn’t demand that RS and AS are run by the same entity, but that's the 
most common scenario. FB doesn't need to specify a resource, because the 
resource is implicit.. it's the FB graph, you can’t get a token for anything 
else. The only differentiator ends up being the scopes. Same for many other 
providers, google, Microsoft for its own Graph, etc.
However many AS as a service don’t have the benefit of a default, implicit 
resource, especially in multi tenancy scenarios, given that they'll need to 
issue tokens for a number of different recipients. Whether resources are cross 
organization, or cross department, or following any other arbitrary 
segregation/factoring model is something we cannot infer- it's up to the 
developer to determine that. What I am trying to express here is that the 
operator of the AS as a service (or any other form of "AS for rent") should 
surface resources as a primitive for modeling and identifying intended 
recipients of ATs. Does tis help? How would you express that? 

>      � I'm having the same confusion in the next paragraph regarding the 
    phrase "different resources". Are services provided by the same company 
    "different resources" or are they all considered the same resource. Can 
    an access token be issued with scopes for both mail.google.com and 
    youtube.com? And if not, why note? Preventing this puts undue burden on 
    mobile based applications.
See preceding point. We can't enter in the merit of what constitutes a 
resource, as that depends on the modeling of the domain specific problem the 
developer is tackling. The highest order bit is that if two entities (API, 
etc.. intended token recipients) have different security characteristics (e.g. 
leaking a token for one has different consequences than if you'd leak a token 
for the other), they should be modeled as different resources. And if they are 
different resources, we should do what we can to avoid confusion in how we 
express access grants to them (hence the big discussion on multiresource, scope 
confusion, etc).


---------
On 3/24/20, 10:39, "George Fletcher" <gffle...@aol.com> wrote:

    Feedback on the spec...
    
    Section 1. Introduction
     ��� second line: scenario should be plural --> scenarios
     ��� second sentence: "are not ran by" --> "are not run by"
    
    Section 2.2.1 Authentication Information Claims
     ��� I'm not sure that this definition of `auth_time` allows for the 
    case where a user is required to solve an additional challenge. Take the 
    case of a user who is required to pass a secondary challenge before the 
    "stock purchase" action can be completed. According to the current spec 
    definition, the `auth_time` value MUST NOT be updated when this 
    secondary challenge is completed.
    
     ��� I think there is a difference between session_start_time and 
last 
    auth_time. This feels more like it's defining the session_start_time 
    concept.
    
     �� These same issues can apply to the `acr` and `amr` values as well.
    
     �� Even if for this secondary challenge a new refresh_token is issued, 
    it is unlikely many relying parties will want to treat that as issuing a 
    new session. The goal is to keep the user logged in to a single session.
    
    Section 2.2.3 Authorization Claims
     �� I find the statement "All the individual scope strings in the scope 
    claim MUST have meaning for the resource indicated in the aud claim" 
    somewhat problematic. In many deployments today for 1st party clients to 
    the authorization server and taking into account mobile applications, 
    the access token most like contains scopes for many of the 1st party 
    backend APIs. It's possible to get around this by setting the 'aud' 
    claim to something like "com.example.apis" and hence all the issued 
    scopes map to that audience claim but that is just working around the 
    MUST in the spec. Given the lack of specificity of the 'aud' claim and 
    the 'resource indicator' claim for that matter, pretty much anything can 
    be made to comply. In that context, it seems like RECOMMEND is a better 
    normative clause.
    
    Section 3. Requesting a JWT Access Token
     �� Per my comments above I suspect that requiring all JWT access 
tokens 
    to include an audience claim will just devolve to audience claims that 
    are somewhat pointless (in order to meet this MUST in the spec). Given 
    the mobile app environment today, it is unreasonable to ask the mobile 
    apps to downscope every access token before making an API call to the 
    backend APIs which is what the spirit of audience and resource 
    indicators seem to imply.
    
     �� Why MUST the AS reject a request with more than one resource 
    parameter? If a request comes in with no resource parameter and multiple 
    scopes the AS is not required to reject that request. Is there much of a 
    semantic difference between the two? In the case of no resource 
    parameter and multiple scopes the AS might issue an access token with 
    multiple audience values (as is allowed by RFC 7519). Also, the audience 
    claim is not solely for resource indicator values but is defined to just 
    be a string. To me it feels like the text is implying that the only 
    valid audience value is also a resource indicator (which from previous 
    discussions on the list it was implied they have a slightly different 
    semantic).
    
     �� The model described here works well if myco.example really only 
    provides a single service. But if instead myco.example provides multiple 
    services each with their own endpoints (srva.myco.example, 
    srvb.myco.example) and scopes, for me this model begins to break down. 
    Either mobile apps are required to downscope all tokens to just the 
    service they are calling at that point in time (which can have latency 
    and connectivity issues), or myco.example has to create a generic 
    "audience" string that represents all of example.com which doesn't seem 
    to be the spirit of the existing specs.
    
     �� In summary, I feel that this text is binding too tightly resource 
    indicators to the audience claim. What is described is perfectly 
    reasonable in a use case that is applying resource indicators in this 
    way but is not indicative of the widely deployed models that already exist.
    
    Section 4. Validating JWT Access Tokens
     �� Step 4. -- Can we change the wording to not require resource 
    indicators? What about... "The resource server MUST validate that the 
    'aud' claim contains a string that represents the audience of this 
    resource server."
    
    Section 5. "cross-JWT confusion"
     �� I think there may be confusion around what is meant by "distinct 
    resources". In my example above, are srva.myco.example and 
    srvb.myco.example "distinct resources"? or is the goal here to say that 
    we want different audience values generated for cross-organization 
    resources. For example, are mail.google.com and youtube.com "distinct 
    resources"? or would an audience for google suffice in meeting the 
    meaning of this paragraph?
    
     � I'm having the same confusion in the next paragraph regarding the 
    phrase "different resources". Are services provided by the same company 
    "different resources" or are they all considered the same resource. Can 
    an access token be issued with scopes for both mail.google.com and 
    youtube.com? And if not, why note? Preventing this puts undue burden on 
    mobile based applications.
    
    Section 6. Privacy
     �� cofidentiality --> confidentiality
    
    
    Thanks,
    George
    
    
    
    
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