Thanks Vladimir, both comments should be easy to address in -03 (HTTPS/TLS
required and SHOULD on short lifetime *and* single use).

On Sun, Jul 19, 2020 at 12:55 PM Vladimir Dzhuvinov <[email protected]>
wrote:

> Thanks for the update. With the "require PAR" AS and client metadata the
> spec is now "policy complete". I can't think of what else there is to add..
>
>
> I have two comments about -02:
>
>
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-par-02#section-2
>
> I didn't see a mention of https / TLS being required for the PAR endpoint..
> The reader could assume http is fine.
>
>
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-par-02#section-2.2
>
>    Since the request URI can be replayed, its lifetime SHOULD be short
>    and preferably limited to one-time use.
>
> The SHOULD is ambiguous here - does it apply to the lifetime only, or to
> the lifetime and the single use.
>
>
> Vladimir
>
>
> On 10/07/2020 21:36, Brian Campbell wrote:
>
> WG,
>
> A new -02 draft of "OAuth 2.0 Pushed Authorization Requests" has been
> published. A summary of the changes, taken from the document history, is
> included below for ease of reference.
>
>    -02
>
>    *  Update Resource Indicators reference to the somewhat recently
>       published RFC 8707 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8707>
>
>    *  Added metadata in support of pushed authorization requests only
>       feature
>
>    *  Update to comply with draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-21 
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-21>, which 
> requires
>       "client_id" in the authorization request in addition to the
>       "request_uri"
>
>    *  Clarified timing of request validation
>
>    *  Add some guidance/options on the request URI structure
>
>    *  Add the key used in the request object example so that a reader
>       could validate or recreate the request object signature
>
>    *  Update to draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-25 
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-25> and added 
> note regarding
>       "require_signed_request_object"
>
>
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> Title:          OAuth 2.0 Pushed Authorization Requests
> Document date:  2020-07-10
> Group:          oauth
> Pages:          18
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> Abstract:
>    This document defines the pushed authorization request endpoint,
>    which allows clients to push the payload of an OAuth 2.0
>    authorization request to the authorization server via a direct
>    request and provides them with a request URI that is used as
>    reference to the data in a subsequent authorization request.
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