Thanks, Éric. Reply inline:
On Wed, Aug 5, 2020 at 5:47 PM Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thank you for the work put into this document. > > Please find below a couple of non-blocking COMMENTs. > > I hope that this helps to improve the document, > > Regards, > > -éric > > == COMMENTS == > Should the document shepherd's write-up be updated ? It is dated October > 2016... about 4 years ago. > > -- Section 5.2 -- > Based on the long history of this document, is the following statement > "Many > phones in the market as of this writing still" still valid ? > Yes, partly because the demand for the authorization request payload is becoming large these days. As we can see in the PAR draft, we are precipitating to request_uri pattern. > > -- Section 5.2.1 -- > Suggest to give a hint about the use of tfp.example.org (TFP is expanded > only > in section 10.2). > You are right. Perhaps it may be better to give two examples, one with TFP with one-liner explanation and another with URN that is being stored at the authorization server. > > == NITS == > > Please check the ID-NITS at > > https://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26.txt Thanks. Will do. > > > > > _______________________________________________ > OAuth mailing list > OAuth@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth > -- Nat Sakimura (=nat) Chairman, OpenID Foundation http://nat.sakimura.org/ @_nat_en
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