Hi all, I have two very small suggestions which I also raised as issues on Github:
1. There are no hints in front of example requests/responses if extra line breaks are used for display purposes. I think hints such as "(with extra line breaks for display purposes only)" should be added to the examples. (#64 <https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-par/issues/64>) 2. In section 3 there is a typo in step 2. I think it should be "*Validate *the request object signature as specified in JAR [I-D.ietf-oauth-jwsreq], section 6.2." instead of "*Validates *the ...". The imperative is used in step 1, as well. (#65 <https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-par/issues/65>) Best regards; Karsten On 12.08.2020 00:07, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef wrote: > All, > > This is a WGLC on the *Pushed Authorization Requests *document: > https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-oauth-par-03.html > > Please, take a look and provide feedback on the list by *August 25th.* > > Regards, > Rifaat & Hannes > > > _______________________________________________ > OAuth mailing list > OAuth@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth -- Karsten Meyer zu Selhausen IT Security Consultant Phone: +49 (0)234 / 54456499 Web: https://hackmanit.de | IT Security Consulting, Penetration Testing, Security Training Unsere nächste Live Online-Schulung zur Sicherheit von OAuth und OpenID Connect am 24.09 + 25.09: https://hackmanit.de/de/schulungen/109-live-online-schulung-single-sign-on-sicherheit-oauth-openid-connect-am-24-und-25-09-2020 Hackmanit GmbH Universitätsstraße 60 (Exzenterhaus) 44789 Bochum Registergericht: Amtsgericht Bochum, HRB 14896 Geschäftsführer: Prof. Dr. Jörg Schwenk, Prof. Dr. Juraj Somorovsky, Dr. Christian Mainka, Dr. Marcus Niemietz
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