Hi Hannes,

Two comments between the lines.

Hi Victorio, Hi all,

I am doing my shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-oauth-access-token-jwt-07. Reading through the draft I have a few minor suggestions:

Section 2:

I would delete this sentence "JWT access tokens are regular JWTs complying with the requirements described in this section."

Reason: You pretty much make the same statement on the previous page (see terminology section).

Section 2.1

s/asymmetric algorithms/asymmetric cryptography

(same replacement in Section 4)

s/   This specification registers the "application/at+jwt" media type,

   which can be used to indicate that the content is an access token./This specification registers the "application/at+jwt" media type,

   which can be used to indicate that the content is a JWT access token.

Use capitalized "Section" when a section number is indicated, such as in Section 2.2.

Section 2.2

s/""aud"/"aud"

2.2.1

s/   auth_time  OPTIONAL - as defined in section 2 of [OpenID.Core]./   auth_time  OPTIONAL - as defined in Section 2 of [OpenID.Core].

s/   acr, amr  OPTIONAL - as defined in section 2 of [OpenID.Core]./   acr, amr  OPTIONAL - as defined in Section 2 of [OpenID.Core].

s/Please see/See

s/For example:/For example,

Section 4

You write:

"Authorization servers SHOULD implement OAuth 2.0 Authorization Server Metadata [RFC8414] ... "

Are you sure you mean "implement" and not "use"? The paragraph gives me the impression that you talk about "ASs using RFC 8414"

s/Please see section Section 5 for further guidance on security implications./Please see Section 5 for further guidance on security implications.

This sentence sounds strange to me:

"

   When invoked as described in OAuth 2.0 Bearer Token Usage [RFC6750],

   resource servers receiving a JWT access token MUST validate it in the

   following manner.

"

How about:

"

   Resource servers receiving a JWT access token MUST validate it in the

   following manner.

"

Question: If you refer to RFC 6750 and then list the steps are you just repeating the steps from RFC 6750 or are you augmenting them?

You write:

"

If the JWT access token includes authorization claims as described in

   the authorization claims section, the resource server SHOULD use them

   in combination with any other contextual information available to

   determine whether the current call should be authorized or rejected.

"

Include a reference to the authorization claims section

s/ For more

   details on cross-JWT confusion please refer to 2.8 of [RFC8725]./ For more

   details on cross-JWT confusion please refer to Section 2.8 of [RFC8725].

You write:

"

   Authorization servers should not rely on the use of different keys

   for signing OpenID Connect ID Tokens and JWT tokens as a method to

   safeguard against the consequences of leaking specific keys.

"

The phrase "leaking keys" is probably not the best term to describe what follows afterwards in the text.

You write:

"

The client MUST NOT inspect the content of

   the access token

"

This RFC 2119 language is not really enforceable in terms of interoperability. Maybe you could rephrase a bit. Something like the following would work:

"

   Authorization server and the resource server

   might decide to change token format at any time (for example by

   switching from this profile to opaque tokens). Hence, any logic in the

   client relying on the ability to read the access token content would

   break without recourse. The OAuth 2.0 framework assumes that access tokens

   are treated opaque by clients.

   Administrators of authorization servers should also take into account that

   the content of an access token is visible to the client. Whenever client

   access to the access token content presents privacy issues for a

   given scenario, the authorization server should take explicit steps

   to prevent it.

"


/In the general case, /the OAuth 2.0 framework assumes that access tokens are treated as opaque by clients. However, with this coming RFC, we are not in the general case: since the client gets back an access token conformant to _this_ RFC, then it knows exactly its detailed structure. The argument about "changing the token format at any time" does not apply. In this case, the client is quite sure that it would be able to understand most of its content (at least all the standard claims). The above text proposal would need to be reconsidered.

Hiding (by encrypting it) the content of the access token to the client is odd when an access token contains claims about a human-user : these claims are personal data and the human-user is usually allowed to have access to his own personal data.

Encryption is nice in theory but complicated in practice, since a key management system must put in place. Whenever possible, it should be avoided.

BTW, some questions raised during the WGLC have not been answered: How can a client request an access token compliant to this profile ? Which parameter(s) allow it to ask an access token compliant to this profile ? How can the AS know that it got a call for the issuance of an access token
compliant to this profile ?

Another comment follows.

You wrote:

"

   In scenarios in which JWT access tokens are accessible to the end

   user, it should be evaluated whether the information can be accessed

   without privacy violations (for example, if an end user would simply

   access his or her own personal information) or if steps must be taken

   to enforce confidentiality.  Possible measures include: encrypting

   the access token, encrypting the sensitive claims, omitting the

   sensitive claims or not using this profile, falling back on opaque

   access tokens.

"

The first sentence is a repetition of the previous paragraph. I would suggest to delete

the first sentence in this paragraph and to move the second sentence to the previous paragraph.

You wrote:

"

   This profile mandates the presence of the "sub" claim in every JWT

   access token, making it possible for resource servers to rely on that

   information for performing tasks such as correlating incoming

   requests with data stored locally for the authenticated principal.

   Although the ability to correlate requests might be required by

   design in many scenarios, there are scenarios where the authorization

   server might want to prevent correlation to preserve the desired

   level of privacy.  Authorization servers should choose how to assign

   "sub" values according to the level of privacy required by each

   situation.  For instance: if a solution requires preventing tracking

   principal activities across multiple resource servers, the

   authorization server should ensure that JWT access tokens meant for

   different resource servers have distinct "sub" values tht cannot be

   correlated in the event of resource servers collusion.  Similarly: if

   a solution requires preventing a resource server from correlating the

   principal's activity within the resource itself, the authorization

   server should assign different "sub" values for every JWT access

   token issued.  In turn, the client should obtain a new JWT access

   token for every call to the resource server, to ensure that the

   resource server receives different "sub" and "jti" values at every

   call, thus preventing correlation between distinct requests.

"

The above paragraph suggests that there are different levels of privacy. What you are

talking about in the text is unlinkability and identification. Ways to deal with such

privacy threats are described in Section 6 of RFC 6973.

Hence, I would suggest to slightly rephrase the paragraph to something like:

"

   This profile mandates the presence of the "sub" claim in every JWT

   access token, making it possible for resource servers to rely on that

   information for correlating incoming

   requests with data stored locally for the authenticated principal.

   Although the ability to correlate requests might be required by

   design in many scenarios, there are scenarios where the authorization

   server might want to prevent correlation. The "sub" claim should be

   populated by the authorization servers according to a privacy impact

   assessment. For instance, if a solution requires preventing tracking

   principal activities across multiple resource servers, the

   authorization server should ensure that JWT access tokens meant for

   different resource servers have distinct "sub" values that cannot be

   correlated in the event of resource servers collusion.

While the idea is really nice, the use of the "sub" claim in this context is not compatible with the definition of the "sub" claim
as defined in RFC 7519:

     4.1.2.  "sub" (Subject) Claim

        The "sub" (subject) claim identifies the principal that is the
        subject of the JWT.  The claims in a JWT are normally statements
        about the subject. *The subject value MUST either be scoped to be**
**        locally unique in the context of the issuer or be globally unique.*         The processing of this claim is generally application specific.  The
        "sub" value is a case-sensitive string containing a StringOrURI
        value.  Use of this claim is OPTIONAL.

There are two options and two options only:

   "locally unique in the context of the issuer" means that it is the
   same for all RSs.
   "globally unique" means that it is the same not only for all the RSs
   but also for servers that have nothing to do with OAuth (e.g. an
   email address).


    Similarly, if

   a solution requires preventing a resource server from correlating the

   principal's activity within the resource itself, the authorization

   server should assign different "sub" values for every JWT access

   token issued.  In turn, the client should obtain a new JWT access

   token for every call to the resource server, to ensure that the

   resource server receives different "sub" and "jti" values at every

   call, thus preventing correlation between distinct requests.

The proposed text describes two different cases where the sub claim is either unique for an AS/RS pair orunique for each access token.

These two cases are not included in the definition found in RFC 7519.

In the general case, an identifier can be:

1. locally unique in the context of the issuer (i.e. the same for all RSs),
2. globally unique (i.e. the same not only for all the RSs but also for
   servers that have nothing to do with OAuth),
3. unique for an AS/RS pair, or
4. unique for each access token.

I see different ways to solve this problem:

   1° Stick to the definition of RFC 7519 and (unfortunately) remove
   these possibilities.
   2° Define two new claims which would support the two cases where the
   sub claim would be either unique for an AS/RS pair orunique for one
   access token.
   3° Define four new claims which would support the four above cases.

Denis

"

Section 7.2

s/   Section Section 2.2.3.1 of this specification refers to the

   attributes "roles", "groups", "entitlements" defined in [RFC7643] to

   express authorization information in JWT access tokens.

/   Section 2.2.3.1 of this specification refers to the

   attributes "roles", "groups", "entitlements" defined in [RFC7643] to

   express authorization information in JWT access tokens.

References

RFC 7519 has to be a normative reference:

   [RFC7519]  Jones, M., Bradley, J., and N. Sakimura, "JSON Web Token

              (JWT)", RFC 7519, DOI 10.17487/RFC7519, May 2015,

<https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7519>.

RFC 7644 is an unused reference:

   [RFC7644]  Hunt, P., Ed., Grizzle, K., Ansari, M., Wahlstroem, E.,

              and C. Mortimore, "System for Cross-domain Identity

Management: Protocol", RFC 7644, DOI 10.17487/RFC7644,

September 2015, <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7644>.

The same is true for RFC 3986:

   [RFC3986]  Berners-Lee, T., Fielding, R., and L. Masinter, "Uniform

              Resource Identifier (URI): Generic Syntax", STD 66,

              RFC 3986, DOI 10.17487/RFC3986, January 2005,

<https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc3986>.

Ciao

Hannes

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