Thanks, these look good.
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Subject: RE: Mike Bishop's No Objection on draft-ietf-oauth-rfc8725bis-07: 
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Thanks for the review comments, Mike.

https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-rfc8725bis-09.html is intended 
to address your comments.  Per the history entries, the changes made were:

- Clarified that the JWE decompression size limit is a ballpark drawn from 
deployed libraries (IESG review).
- IESG nits: replaced "blindly" and added a missing comma after "However".

                                Best wishes,
                                -- Mike

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# IESG review of draft-ietf-oauth-rfc8725bis-07

CC @MikeBishop

## Comments

### Section 3.15, paragraph 1
```
     Implementations are RECOMMENDED to set a reasonable upper limit on
     the decompressed size of a JWE such as 250 KB, because without such a
     limit, decompression can impose an unreasonable memory or CPU burden
     on recipients.
```
Where is the 250 KB value coming from? When would someone select a different
value? I read this as RECOMMENDing a limit and providing an example value, but
then I'm not sure the example value adds anything besides a risk people will
infer it as part of the recommendation. (A similar recommendation in 3.13 points
to OWASP guidance for a particular combination with a note that it's merely a
time-of-publishing value.)

### "Appendix A.", paragraph 3
```
     2.  Encryption-Signature Confusion: Added mitigation for attacks
         where verifiers don't distinguish between successful decryption
         and successful signature validation (Section 3.12).
```
Is 3.12 the intended reference? This seems more related to 3.3's "MUST ...
distinguish between signed JWTs (JWSes) and encrypted JWTs (JWEs)."

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Inclusive language

Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more
guidance:

 * Term `blindly`; alternatives might be `without consideration`, `negligently`,
   `uncritically`, `unthinkingly`, `hastily`, etc.

### Grammar/style

#### Section 2.1, paragraph 3
```
simple signed JWT as their token. However verifiers don't always check that
                                  ^^^^^^^
```
A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb "However".



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