Hi Michael
I like it.
The only thing that could be improved is the Enterprise Class Features
Section.
Compared to the other Sections it looks a little Bare bones.
Maybe one or two Sentences per Feature.
Or like Alexander Mentioned you could also use links to other Sites.
Greetings
Till
On 24.10.2016 04:54, Michael Kruger wrote:
This is a request for comments for an updated OpenIndiana-Welcome doc...
Did a quick update of the doc which ships with OI and is presented the
first time Firefox is run.
Please review and if you have suggestions for what else should be added
to this, or would like to see something changed, please let me know.
Feel free to turn on change tracking and send me back an edited copy.
but please no bike-shedding.....as I would like to see this get shipped
with the next release.
ODT file is attached.
thanks,
Michael
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