Hello Agree to the update of P9,P10,P11. And also agree to remove D2 term. But I don’t think the update to P7 is more suitable, the original version seems better.
Best regards 发件人: onap-tsc-boun...@lists.onap.org [mailto:onap-tsc-boun...@lists.onap.org] 代表 eric.deb...@orange.com 发送时间: 2017年11月24日 4:04 收件人: onap-tsc@lists.onap.org; onap-...@lists.onap.org 主题: [onap-tsc] [arch] Corrections for the architecture document. Hello Please find some corrections for the Architecture document https://www.onap.org/wp-content/uploads/sites/20/2017/11/ONAP_CaseSolution_Architecture_FNL.pdf As noticed by Nermin, the D2 term should be removed from Figure 1 P7. Controllers I think the VF-C definition is not exact according to existing R1 code. “Also, the Virtual Function Controller (VF-C) provides an ETSI NFV compliant NFV-O function, and is responsible for lifecycle management of virtual services and the associated physical COTS server infrastructure. VF-C provides a generic VNFM capability but also integrates with external VNFMS and VIMs as part of a NFV MANO stack.” We propose to replace by “The Virtual Function Controller (VF-C) is responsible for managing the lifecycle of VNF when this cannot be achieved by other components of the ONAP architecture and for managing the lifecycle of network services that comprise at least one of such VNF. It can also processes fault and performance management events to trigger the ONAP closed loops.“ P9 vCPE use-case “Similarly, ONAP uses the APP -C component to manage the virtualization infrastructure.” ð “Similarly, ONAP uses the APP -C component to manage the VNF lifecycle“ P10&11 References/Links to the use case white papers are missing “Read the Residential vCPE Use Case with ONAP whitepaper to learn more.” “Read the VoLTE Use Case with ONAP whitepaper to learn more.” Best Regards Eric _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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