Author: robweir
Date: Sat Mar 3 01:13:49 2012
New Revision: 1296544
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1296544&view=rev
Log:
Edited news stories to be more similar in tone to the rest of the front page,
e.g., let formal, refering to "our" project, etc.
Modified:
incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html
Modified: incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html?rev=1296544&r1=1296543&r2=1296544&view=diff
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--- incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html (original)
+++ incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/index.html Sat Mar 3 01:13:49 2012
@@ -117,15 +117,15 @@
<div id="news">
<div class="campaign">
<h2>www.openoffice.org is now hosted by the Apache Software Foundation</h2>
- <p>The website has migrated to infrastructure hosted by the Apache Software
Foundation. Join the
+ <p>Our website has migrated to infrastructure hosted by the Apache Software
Foundation. Join the
<a
href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/mailing-lists.html#users_mailing_list";>Users
Mailing List</a> or
<a href="http://user.services.openoffice.org/";>User Forums</a> if you have
questions or comments</p>
</div>
<div class="campaign">
- <h2>Keep up with Apache OpenOffice (incubating)</h2>
- <p>Keep up with latest developments in OpenOffice.org and the Apache
OpenOffice project at the
- <a href="https://blogs.apache.org/OOo/";>Apache OpenOffice.org (Incubating)
blog</a> or by subscribing to the
+ <h2>Keep up with Apache OpenOffice</h2>
+ <p>Keep up with latest developments in OpenOffice.org and the Apache
OpenOffice project at our new
+ <a href="https://blogs.apache.org/OOo/";>Apache OpenOffice.org blog</a> or by
subscribing to our
<a
href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/mailing-lists.html#announce_mailing_list";>Announce
Mailing List</a>.</p>
</div>
@@ -133,8 +133,8 @@
<h2>OpenOffice.org Joins Apache Incubator</h2>
<p>On June 1, 2011, Oracle announced that it was donating OpenOffice.org's
code to
<a
href="http://www.marketwire.com/press-release/statements-on-openofficeorg-contribution-to-apache-nasdaq-orcl-1521400.htm";>The
Apache Software Foundation's Incubator.</a>
- The Apache OpenOffice (Incubating) <a
href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/";>http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg</a>
site was been established on June 13, 2011.
- Please join us in this new, sustained phase of OpenOffice.org's life by
subscribing to the <a
href="http://incubator.apache.org/projects/openofficeorg.html";>mailing
lists</a>. <!--The <i>dev</i>
+ The Apache OpenOffice "podling" <a
href="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/";>http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg</a>
site was established on June 13, 2011.
+ Please join us in this new phase of OpenOffice.org by subscribing to our
<a href="http://incubator.apache.org/projects/openofficeorg.html";>mailing
lists</a>. <!--The <i>dev</i>
mailing list is currently a catch all list for planning OpenOffice.org's
existence in the ASF environment. We welcome your continued involvement!<br />
OpenOffice.org downloads and support will continue to be available from this
OpenOffice.org site during the transition phase. --></p>
</div>
